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Re: With no tears
I'm not really sure what I think of this. It seems like it's all about getting drunk or high and doing some not so moral things while there drunks. Okay... ...
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Re: Don't Greet Me
This was lovely and adorable. :) Though, some parts you told us instead of showing us. I'll go through here and show you which parts I'm talking about. :) Yes, ...
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Re: Cancer
This made me cry. I don't know anyone with cancer personally, but, I pray for those who do. Its so horrible what those with and those around them have to ...
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Re: Not an Angel from Above
Though you know my opinion on these matters, I still really enjoyed this. :) No one deserves to be judged, your right. So, awesome job on that. Now onto nit-picks, ...
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Re: Spider Web
I really enjoyed reading this. :) It has a lot of meaning to it and emotion under it all. Kudos to you for that. :)
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Sollicitus Intus - "Anxious Within"
All of your acrostic poems have some kind of deeper meaning. I love it. :) Kudos to you for writing some that are different than the others on here are. ...
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Re: Outside Alone - Foris Solum
Most acrostic poems are creative and fun, while this one has some deeper meaning. It was refreshing. :) I really like what you wrote here, because I can quite identify ...
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Re: Love (Unfortunately)
I don't have any critiques for this, because it's an acrostic, which I really don't know how to review, other than to say that I love them. :) The 'I ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Advertisements
This describes ads to a T. I love it. :) You mix in just enough truth and comedy into these poems. I love it. :)
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Quiznos
These poems are all very clever and adorable. :) I really love how comedic it is. Woooonderful job. I love how you sum up just random subjects in these small ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Double Bass
This was written beautifully. I really don't have anything bad to say about it, the metaphors you used were great, your writing style was fabulous. Just wonderful job altogether. :)
May 11, 2011 -
Re: End of a Dream
Hey there. :) I agree with the first reviewer- it was long and stretched out, and hard for me to continue reading. You'll get better at keeping the reader entertained ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: I hate you.
I really enjoyed reading this. :) The other reviewers have told you any nitpicks that I have, so, yeah. :) What I really like about this poem was the persistence ...
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Re: Dwindling Mind
This poem was interesting, to say the least. :) It seems like you wrote down really pretty pink and blue thoughts. I really enjoyed reading this. :) Tranquility, peace, clarity. ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: The Realm of Insanity
Hey. :) I did enjoy reading this poem, but there are a few things you could do to make it better. :) First off, the stanzas were different lengths, which ...
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