AdmiralKat

Hello, Katya here to review as requested! :D Let's start by saying I love the idea of this piece and you should definitely continue writing this piece. I am curious. ...

Hello, KatyaElefant here to review. Let's see what we have here. So when I look at the age, I see that she is soon turning 18. This leads to wonder ...

Can you explain what a fry is? I looked it up and I can still find no answer. That would be great. If you have a real definition, you should ...

This poem is one of those poems where you go WOW! You think this because one, it is short and two, it has such a big message. The title brings ...

This poem may refer to my mother. She calls my name over and over and yet I don't answer back because I am too busy to talk. The poem refers ...

First question for you, has this happened to you? I hope not. This poem is very interesting in its own way. One thing that made me a little uncomfortable is ...

This poem is so cool in the way that is from a comeback that I heard and I am pretty sure that you heard it. I love how many poems ...

This poem is really sweet and beautiful. There are somethings that you can improve however. What you can do is not repeat the first words in sentences so much for ...

I think for starters, you need a new name for your poem so that people are drawn in better. You could call it My Preference on Beauty(My First Poem). Don't ...

Time to review some haikus( *shrieks* ). One thing I have to let known is that I hate haikus, okay let's get reviewing. Let's start with the first poem, this ...

Yet again another wonderful poem by fortis. Before I start. Did you know that the most common answer to the ACT test is C? Now to get to reviewing. If ...

This poem is very original. Love it. I love what people can create when they are bored and they have something random like you did when you crossed out the ...

When I first read this, I had to look up what purple gold was. XD This poem shows the value of some valuables. The theme is kind of hard to ...

This poem is beautiful. I love it so much. It speaks to my heart. There once was a saying, "Without darkness, we would know no light." This poem shows the ...

This poem made me think really hard. This person is struggling through hard times and whoever they are dating or are in love with is betraying them. This has a ...