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Adeera

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Concentrate on Ripples

    hey nice work girl!! i really liked this line epically "concentrate on ripples never let them fade keep them growing yonder where stillness had once laid" very nice. it flows ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wind

    this is really good when i read it i felt like i was the wind or like i know what it whispers when it blows in my ear. yeah i ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Paralysed

    ok so this was amazingly well done in my opinion. and by the way i was about that close to literally shaking the screen and yelling "FLEX THE STINKING REIGNS!!!!!" ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Bullets

    that was good!!! nicely done!! it's just makes me sad though that she couldn't just whip out a claymore and blast them all *BOOM!!!*

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Bubbles

    this is so adorable, i really like it. it all rhymes really well and it's very creative. just the way you said everything, i could feel the bubbles popping on ...

    Jul 30, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: 'A Child Shall Lead Them,' Short Story

    i like this a lot. i was so relieved when i found out she was dreaming haha but i really like the way you told it, i could picture everything. ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Underneath My Skin

    yeah so this pretty much broke my heart when i read it very nice job

    Jul 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Impossible Understanding

    hmm i like it, makes you think.

    Jul 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Three Letters

    oh my word that is sooo cute!!

    Jul 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Richard

    Thanks!

    Jul 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: With you =)

    oohh very nice i really liked it, it's very cute. the creative coloring really piqued my interest. i like how you had an actual girl write the first part and ...

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Whispered Strength Prologue and Chapter 1

    ok so i did a lot of editing and i do think it looks better thank you big bunches!!!

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Elle (Chapter 6)

    honey !! you honestly have to stop apologize for the freaking length!!! it's AMAZING!!!!

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Do angels cry in heaven?

    Beautiful

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: From The Arms of Our Fathers

    sweet!! PM me when you get ANY of your stuff recorded!! great job!

    Jul 15, 2010


In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.
— Robert Frost