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Re: Concentrate on Ripples
hey nice work girl!! i really liked this line epically "concentrate on ripples never let them fade keep them growing yonder where stillness had once laid" very nice. it flows ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Wind
this is really good when i read it i felt like i was the wind or like i know what it whispers when it blows in my ear. yeah i ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Paralysed
ok so this was amazingly well done in my opinion. and by the way i was about that close to literally shaking the screen and yelling "FLEX THE STINKING REIGNS!!!!!" ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Bullets
that was good!!! nicely done!! it's just makes me sad though that she couldn't just whip out a claymore and blast them all *BOOM!!!*
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Bubbles
this is so adorable, i really like it. it all rhymes really well and it's very creative. just the way you said everything, i could feel the bubbles popping on ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: 'A Child Shall Lead Them,' Short Story
i like this a lot. i was so relieved when i found out she was dreaming haha but i really like the way you told it, i could picture everything. ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Underneath My Skin
yeah so this pretty much broke my heart when i read it very nice job
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Impossible Understanding
hmm i like it, makes you think.
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Three Letters
oh my word that is sooo cute!!
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Richard
Thanks!
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: With you =)
oohh very nice i really liked it, it's very cute. the creative coloring really piqued my interest. i like how you had an actual girl write the first part and ...
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: Whispered Strength Prologue and Chapter 1
ok so i did a lot of editing and i do think it looks better thank you big bunches!!!
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 6)
honey !! you honestly have to stop apologize for the freaking length!!! it's AMAZING!!!!
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: Do angels cry in heaven?
Beautiful
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: From The Arms of Our Fathers
sweet!! PM me when you get ANY of your stuff recorded!! great job!
Jul 15, 2010
