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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Folded Paper

    Wow that was a great poem, A wonderful metaphor which i dont think anybody has come up with, In a personal note we all go through many trails and tribulations ...

    Apr 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Disintegration

    This is a wonderful poem. Lyrically it was heavy which gave me a vivid image of this piece. The piece also looks like something you really took your time to ...

    Jan 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Why?

    Hi i really liked the poem, i have written pieces like this (concept wise) and with me i've realized that what carry's you on to finish the piece is the ...

    Jan 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Searching for Paradise

    First of all i think the previous reviewer had very valid points, it is a good poem but it has to much of a simple structure which relates back to ...

    Jan 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The BIG Random Story Theme Contest Entry!

    I really liked the idea of this story, it comes out great but as the reviewer before me pointed out that there are some sentences that need to be looked ...

    Sep 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Evidence Has a Story

    Wow Great poem, honestly the ideas you put on to paper is astounding. As I have stated before I think your imagination is what excels you from many others. I ...

    Jan 8, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Push

    Hmmmm this poem is interesting, i love what you said but i believe you could of presented it much betterPush, pull Thrust , shove Never stopping, never moving. That’s the ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Screams in The Night

    This poem has a real dark and gloomy concept to it and the language you use really engages the reader and allows them to sink everything you are trying to ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Focused Eyes

    Wow this poem is amazing, i have come across a lot of poem's but none like the concept of this one. The concept is what struck me the most, as ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Together forever

    I Like The Gesture That It Was For Your Gran, Which Is Beautiful cause I Got One Myself and I Wanna Write a Poem About Her But I Honestly Think ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Free Babar Ahmad

    What can i say? This piece of work defines the word beautiful, As a poet myself you realize the meaning of the message and how its conveyed by the language ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Planning Landmarks

    "Sitting in Isolation with notebook open and a packet in front of me and my agenda opened. Nobody knows that if you sit with your agenda open no-one bothers to ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Let It Come

    Just Beautiful, Honestly when i come across pieces such as these it really makes me smile This poem is simple and really relatable "Pretend to forget about it And it ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Oblong Houses

    This is a strange kind of poem, as it was a very short poem it just adds the mystery around it I enjoy poem's such as these as it is ...

    Oct 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: One Step

    Wow well done, I genuinely like this poem. Its not often i stare back and hope that i wrote something like this This is a true narrative Poem Your Stanzas ...

    Oct 12, 2011


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