Abhilash007

Hey, it is really an interesting work here. it kept me reading throughout. It does have potential and i can see really good concepts and ideas here. As people have ...

Hi, This is a very sweet poem. I Enjoyed reading it. there are some places where you can do a little improvisations. Instead of the line "Stars twinkling in the ...

This is an awesome piece of writing. The way you have explained things are brilliant. I liked the concept very much. you can express the pain felt by the girl ...

Hi, This is a good piece of writing and you have explained it really well. In this it would be better if you throw some light on what his intake ...

This piece is really interesting and emotional. It really hooked me on to it. The way you have written is casual and more or a an individual view. You have ...

Hi, First of all This is a very good piece to start with. You have given more importance to explain each and every detail, that's a good thing but if ...

Nice one... You could have put how love differs from love. I really appreciate you for taking such a sensitive topic. There are many things which one can learn from ...

I appreciate you for this beautiful poem. Its a nice work. I suggest you could add more things into this poem. You have told about worries and you are afraid ...

i just went back to the memories of my high school. This style is really amazing. For every paragraph i read, this story took me to the world of memories. ...

I love the title. Silence is my personally favorite word. Silence is something which is so beautiful like the nature. The way you have expressed about children and about their ...

Its an awesome poem. I really loved it. You have just given your message to the society that you are just being what you are supposed to be and how ...

The poem is really touching and so sweet. The feel of the poem is really nice, it carries that feel till the last line. In the line "I couldn’t just ...

First i would like to tell that your title of the poem is really good. Coming to the poem part, i think you could have used more touching words rather ...