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Hey there! :D So, I was very confused my the purpose of this: what exactly are you trying to convey? Revenge was stated in the title, yes, but um... I ...

Hello there! :) I'm here for a review, so follow on :) Overall, I think you had a general idea of what you wanted the reader to visualize, but this ...

Hello there :) I think you did a good job with this. I definitely have questions about it, but you did well. I like the detail that you put into ...

Alright, I'll just hop right to it for you! :) You had a lot of nice moments in this, and below I've picked out the phrases or sentences that really ...

Hello there :) Very well done on the creepy-scale. I really enjoyed it, and I think you have some great things going for you here. A few things I'm unclear ...

Hello there :) Ill jump right in and say it was an interesting piece to read, and I know it was probably a little difficult to write from that point ...

Hello there :) Interesting concept, and I believe that the very real threat of depression haunts everyone at least once in their life. Others, it haunts us more than one ...

Hello there :) I thought this piece was a little rushed and information was given to the reader, and then the end. I felt like it lacked emotion and that ...

Hello there! Here for a review I'll start out by saying wow. You had a lot of great moments in this piece and I could definitely relate to it. I ...

Hello there :) I loved this, it was just descriptive enough to give the reader an overall view of what was going on but held back things to keep it ...

Hello there:) I'll start out with the overall impression and kind of work down to the tid-bits of things :) I found this piece captivating; I wanted to learn more ...

Hello there :) Hope I help with the following review :) I'll start out with the overall impression. I definitely think you wrote this at the right time of year, ...

Hello there :) I'll start with overall impression: all of it was summed up well in that last sentence, and I love how every line can relate to the last. ...

Hello there. I'll start with an overall impression. Not really powerful. I'm reading words with no feelings behind them, maybe it's an overused topic. There's definitely an idea there, but ...

Hello there :) I'll start out with a few overall impressions. What you wrote was really powerful, touching and certainly defined drama. Great job. A few nit picks Do I ...