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D: THIS IS GOOD. I said that i would only read one more chapter, but I'm going to read the next to see that hag get whipped! She is awful ...

Cya! (I still reccomend reading A War With No End, but suit yourself!! :) I shall review a few more today and then hit the hay myself. The hay has ...

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"Voice That Haunts My Dreams" You. Are. The. Best. Nickname. Maker. In. The. History. Of. All. Books. That. I. Have. Read. Exept for maybe the hamburger lord. I have to ...

XD thanks! UNLEASHED is now called Tripartite, and published on several stores. It was actually my first book. If you want to read what i think is probably my funniest ...

Ok, I see what you meant when you said that you had a chapter with only 2 lines in it. Still, I like it just as much as your other ...

aaaahhhh. stupid me, i completely missed that! XD

No problem! I also do that, but for me it's mostly because i'm just too lazy to find a word that does rhyme. XD

Ah, thanks for the review! The reason the guard didn't immidiately kill Lilly was because he wasn't sure if she was the one who blew up the house or an ...

Oh my, i have been putting periods after all my dialogue... o.o thanks for telling me!

Thanks! However, it looks like you came to the wrong conclusion on who said the part about getting shot with the laser... that was actually Drake himself. XD

The reason that Lilly hates Jinx so much is explained later in the story. And the council had the pendant with the because they knew that his arm would catch ...

In regards to your first question on the analogy of the bouncy ball, it was supposed to be because he had just been shot out of the Void and violently ...

Hey, thanks for the review! First, Jinx is actually a guy! XD lol. And I did intend for him to come off as extremely childish. Much of the story is ...