ANADIR

Wow. Normally, I don't read things like this and I'm more into fantasy, but this was simply amazing. The piece was very deep and franky I don't think I even ...

Andy here, with the review I said I would make in the last chapter. As I said earlier, your writing is brilliant. It is very descriptive and engaging. It places ...

Andy here to drop a review! Just to start this off, I couldn't seem to find the first parts of the chapter/anything before this. So assuming this is the start, ...

Andy here from team RC. I went back and read the first chapter before I went to this one, so I had some background. Starting with the good, your writing ...

Hey, Andy here to try and get back into YWS. This is the first review I've written in probably a year and a half to two years, but frankly you ...

This is an interesting start to your novel. However, I feel like it was just a tad short. That is just a personal opinion since I tend to like longer ...

This seems like a great start! There are just a few little things. I'll just start of by saying, like Meandbooks said, writing this from a 5 year old's perspective ...

Great work DD! I came here to check this out after you sent me the message saying you got into the literary spotlight. :D Congratz on that by the way. ...

Nice work! Just a little worthless nitpicks. In the third line, you say "Aroma...strong as that of a spice, but calmer." This is just a personal thing, but I would ...

Nice! I think you've summed up the general feelings of unknown authors and poets everywhere. Great work on this! I didn't see any grammatical mistakes, but you probably want a ...

Hey, Andy here for a review! Ok, so I'm not even going to bother pointing out the gramatical errors the other reviewers pointed out. I'm sure you've read more than ...

Holy. **** That was amazing! That story touched my heart. Great work! There were few errors, and the story protrayed the feelings of the poor main character very well. There ...

Ok, andy here with your promised review!! This was a great chapter. It flows well, and certainly has a dramatic/spooky feel too it. It's nice that you didn't throw too ...

This was pretty cool! There are just a few things that I want to mention. You've got a few gramatical issues that I figured I would point out since I ...

Hello! Andy here, to give a review! :D And in this strange place, you found a random user with a random review! Take this since it's not safe to leave ...