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Re: If I spent a hundred years with you
This is a very short, sweet, endearing, and sad poem. That's a lot of words to describe something but I couldn't be more right. The thought of loving someone you ...
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Re: Love
This is a very emotional piece that you have written. It is clearly very personal for you as well as many other people, need I say everybody even. This is ...
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Re: You deserve smiles like stars.
This is an incredibly sad and yet beautifully written poem. I like how the end of the first stanza ends up being the start to the next one. I also ...
Mar 10, 2024 -
Re: Why I Music
I absolutely love this article/piece that you wrote. I like how you start with the definition of what music is. Then you continued to argue that we actually make music ...
Feb 27, 2024 -
Re: Information of Zilus-The guide to the cosmos
This is very creative. I do like that you are working on world-building before even posting your first chapter or anything. It is a great way to introduce your story ...
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Re: Walking Away
I love how harsh this is. You can tell it was truly written with raw emotion. It's horrible that people treat others like this. Even I had a situation like ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: My Love Poem
This was beautifully written. The astronomical references give the reader this feeling of awe. But I noticed the one mention of music. "A melody that time cannot erase." You also ...
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Re: The Tears On My Path
Hey, I just wanted to say that this is a very carefully written poem. Each word seems placed specifically. Instead of "You told me you love me." You wrote.. "You ...
Feb 17, 2024 -
Re: video games, my older brother, and I
Hey this is AJW with another not so normal review. (Basically I review the story and what it's about) This is what feels like a very personal kind of writing. ...
Feb 17, 2024 -
Re: I Find Myself Agreeing
Hello! This is AJW with my not normal review. (Meaning that I'm not as best at noticing the grammar details but I do notice details in the story itself) This ...
Feb 4, 2024 -
Re: The Son of the Night - Prologue
This is amazing! I love the introduction with the setting of the night sky with the storm. It immediately made me think of the title. It shows the combination between ...
Feb 4, 2024 -
Re: Song of you
Hey! I'm AJW. And honestly this may not be a normal kind of review but.. I LOVED THIS PIECE. I myself have been dealing with a situation similar to what ...
Feb 3, 2024
