90skids

Thank you for the review :) I liked the link to the Big Brother profile :) I'm currently editing my work and I'm picking up on a lot of the ...

Thank you for the honest review. I think The Hunger Games was written in the present first person but I'll have to check that.

Thank you. I can understand the thing about learning to shoot not taking minutes but, when I learnt to shoot I hit bulls-eyes the first time so I forget that ...

Thanks for the review and for picking up on those stupid errors :)

Thanks for the review! Yeah, a lot of people have picked up on those inconsistencies so I'll go back and fix them

Thanks :) yeah sometimes when you're typing you just forget to put speech marks at the end

Thanks for the review! I'm going back and revising Charles' character to make him more consistent as we speak.

thanks for the review :) I picked up on the thing with the box too when I re-read it

Thanks for adopting my novel :) the questions you asked are, thankfully, answered later on in the book :)

thanks for the review :)

thanks for the review :)

thanks for the review :) there will be flashbacks

thanks for the review :)

thanks :0

I'll just go through and check out those little grammar errors :) thanks!