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I love this opening, I can just tell that Nina is kinda angry by the use of 'stabbed' Nina stabbed her fork into her bowl of macaroni and cheese I ...

Oh wow, this is amazing. It's not often I see rap songs in the green room, so I just had to read this. I honestly just wanted to start rapping ...

As someone who used to be so obsessed with Creepypasta when I was a teen, especially Jeff the Killer (I wrote my own version of the story once, too, though ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! This is a really lovely poem. I'll be honest, when I first started reading the opening lines: It's you. It's always been you. From the moment ...

Hi again! Do forgive me for not reading the rest before reviewing this chapter; I decided I would review the oldest thing in the green room and this was it, ...

This is a really solid opening or backstory to something bigger, and it works mainly through withholding that important information, which keeps me guessing about whats happened and what's going ...

I love how the opening of this short piece brings us straight into the story, we immediately know that this is child's-eye view of horror, even if we don't know ...

I love the control of drought and water imagery throughout the poem; it really gives the poem a spine and makes it flow like a body of water. It's a ...

First of all, I really like the choice to write all in lowercase and not use capital letters. It makes it feel more emotional and desperate, really highlighting the panic ...

There are some really lovely images in this piece. The dripping stalactites, the midnight sky, the beauty of this woman; you have a real nice way of setting the scene. ...

Wow, okay, as soon as I read that first paragraph, I knew i was in for a treat. It was superbly written, and even without reading the preceding chapters I ...

Hello, me again!

Hi there, I haven't read the previous chapters but now I absolutely HAVE to because this was such an intriguing chapter and I need to know what is going on/what ...

Hey! So I don't actually know anything about Gravity Falls or any of its AUs but it's a show I've heard a lot about so I was intrigued to read ...

oo another short, quick chapter. I read through a few of the past chapters but I will definitely have to catch up with the rest of them after this. It's ...