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Hi! Back again! Eylin's characterisation is really nicely done here, through what she notices about other people. The mystery being set up over what happened to the village is really ...

Hi! Hope you are doing well today/tonight/whatever time it is for you! This poem reads to me like an accusation aimed at a god, or some sort of chosen one, ...

Hi again! I enjoyed your last work, so I wanted to come and check this one out again. I like that it involves drugs, something a little darker & than ...

Hi! This is a really charming first chapter. I really enjoyed it, and I am looking forward to more. I like how it was slow-moving, and not much action, and ...

Hello again! Back for another two chapters. The pace of these two was really nice, and kept me interested throughout. I do agree with Tikaya though that it might be ...

Hey Sebastian! I've been really loving your work and reviews lately, good job! Hope you keep it up! I love the idea presented in this short piece. I am an ...

Hi! I'm here to review your poem this morning Maybe this is how fathers and sons are.. two oceans facing each other, This is a very strong and interesting opening; ...

HI I loved the fight scene. I was really looking forward to it. The pacing is immaculate and doesn't feel too slow or too quick, and it really drew me ...

Hi creeper. I loved the story I read yesterday so when i saw you'd posted another one i was so excited. This piece is excellent. It moves at a quick ...

Hi Creeper! I loved this story a lot. There's so much improvement in your writing lately it has been amazing to see. This really swept me in and kept me ...

Hi! This is a very interesting start to a story. The King's dialogue is quite unsettling, and I really like this detail. The use of all capital letters combined with ...

Hi Amanda! I'm finally getting around to reviewing your story! I really love the opening with the doe, especially the description of nocking the arrow and pulling it taut. The ...

I'm staying still Trying to make it over that hill I like the metaphor that you have going on in this poem, and this is a nice opening; however, since ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS, and well done on posting your first piece! It's a very short piece, but it's doing a lot. There is a real sense of disorientation in ...

Hi! I've been meaning to get to this for ages; apologies that I am only getting to it now! This is a very interesting chapter that sets up the tension ...