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Re: Here in the End (Part 1)
Hi there! You can call me Green, and i'm here to review this first part of your story. :-) A soft wind blew North across the town of Bloomington. On ...
Nov 19, 2020 -
Re: Silent Sakura - Chapter 1
Hi there! You can call me Green, and I'm here to review this first chapter of your story :-) Wind rustled the sakura trees into a swaying serenade, depositing petals ...
Nov 19, 2020 -
Re: Charybdis
Hi there! I'm Green and I'm here to offer a review on your poem. Firstly, as someone who has anxiety, I could really relate to this poem. You captured feelings ...
Nov 19, 2020 -
Re: just eat
Hi there, I'm Green and I'm here for a quick review. You must forgive me, but I haven't reviewed poetry in a while so this might be a bit of ...
Nov 19, 2020 -
Re: Bakit Ang Kyot Mo (A Unique Salonga Fan Fiction)
Hi there, i decided to help you by translating this into English since that is the main language used on this site, so that more of us can read it! ...
Nov 15, 2020 -
Re: The basics
Hi there! I'm going to quickly review your poem :-) Firstly, I really loved the imagery you create within this poem - emotional imagery really. I could really feel and ...
Nov 15, 2020 -
Re: Undefeated Legend
Hi there! I'm che, or green, and I'm here to give a quick review! First, I loved this! I might be bias because i also love Freddie Mercury aha. I ...
Nov 12, 2020 -
Re: Blitz Kidz chapter 1; The Coat Room
Hi there! Quick review from me :-) I really love how the story is being told - I love a good first person narrative as it feels so personal and ...
Nov 12, 2020 -
Re: Wildflower
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Aug 2, 2020 -
Re: Serendipity - chapter 1
Hi there! I really enjoyed this chapter. You seem to have a knack for creating really realistic dialogue, paired with some great personalities! The dynamic between Judy and Edith is ...
Mar 23, 2020 -
Re: How Do You Plead: Prologue
Hi there! You probably saw that I review a later chapter, and I was really enjoying it so I decided to read the whole thing from the beginning. I'll try ...
Mar 23, 2020 -
Re: How Do You Plead: 4.4
Hey there! I saw that this is one of the oldest things in the greenroom at the moment and decided to help you out :-) I haven't read the previous ...
Mar 23, 2020 -
Re: A Lifetime (Chapter Two)
Hey there! So this is my 150th review! And I'm glad I decided to review this for my 150th because I really enjoyed it. There was a HUGE improvement in ...
Mar 23, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 7]
Hi there! After reviewing this I am DEFINITELY going to write the next part of Eyelam, I've been so busy that I keep forgetting too! Ugh! :-) Once again, I ...
Mar 23, 2020 -
Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 8
Hey there! So I'm finally onto the chapter you actually asked me to review! I will try to offer more of a complete overview of the story as well as ...
Mar 22, 2020