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Re: The aftermath or you leaving
Hey! Che here for a quick review! Firstly, I will highlight any areas in which I believe may need a little improving :-) or in the way that a child ...
Apr 14, 2019 -
Re: The Magical Musician---3
Hey! Che here for a review! This has been drifting around the green room for a while so I figured I'd give you another review! I'll start by pointing out ...
Apr 13, 2019 -
Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chapter 2.1
Hey, Che here for a review! This has been in the green room for a while and so I figured you deserved another review! I'll starts, as always, with the ...
Apr 13, 2019 -
Re: Exit 11 - Chapter 2
Hey, Che here for a review! As always, I will begin by highlighting any areas which I believe could use a little improvement :-) As far as Ralys could tell, ...
Apr 13, 2019 -
Re: eastern european setting short script
Hey, Che here for a quick review! This has been floating around in the green room for a while so Ii figured it deserved another review! I must warn you ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Glowpeak Academy- Chapter Nine
Hey there, Che here for a quick review! This has been floating around in the green room for a while now and I figured it deserved another review. I realise ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 23: Back in the Groove
Hey, Che here for a review! I saw this buried in the green room and thought it deserved another review; so here I am! I'll start by pointing out any ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Marble Lungs / Draft two / chapter two
Hey, Che here for a review :-) This has been in the green room for ages so I figured it deserved another review. I'll start by pointing out anywhere I ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Favorite - Chapter Two
Hey, Che here for a review! :-) It was the longest class of the day, we didn’t even do anything half the time. the comma should be replaced with a ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Better Off
Hey, Che here for a quick review :-) First of all, I can really feel the heartache practically bleeding out of this poem. It was honestly really sad and you ...
Apr 11, 2019 -
Re: Your Lies
Hey, Che here for a quick review! First of all, I would just like to say that you did a really good job at getting your emotions across in this ...
Apr 10, 2019 -
Re: At The End
Hey, Che here for a review. Woah, this made feel a lot of things. Mostly, it was sympathy for what Ryan had gone through regarding his brother. You certainly captured ...
Apr 10, 2019 -
Re: Why, Internet?
Hey! Che here for a quick review I loved this poem. I loved how much I could relate to it and how relevant it is to society nowadays! I live ...
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: Creatures of the Past
Hey, Che here for a quick review! I just noticed a few little mistakes: Soring so sigh, I think these are just typo's, but it should be "soaring" and "high" ...
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: The Vadovas' Secret - Prologue (The Silent Tomb)
Hey! Che here for a review. I'll start first by pointing out any areas I think could need a little improving :-) Hundreds, no, thousands of people had been tortured ...
Apr 9, 2019