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"Do you believe in ghosts?" I used to ask Maa when I was young. I think this should be a line by itself, and the rest of the paragraph should ...

I'm so sorry it's taken me over a month to get round to finally reading and reviewing this! Anyway, you really have me intrigued here. Your writing style is so ...

Hey there! I'm going to be reviewing your short story :-) So, I'll start by basically going through the whole thing bit by bit and make grammar corrections or suggest ...

Hi there! So, I just had to read this when I saw it was about Macbeth. I did the play for GCSE English last year and loved it. In fact, ...

Hey there! I thought I'd come back and review these previous chapters as I enjoyed 4 and 5 so much! Thursday evening, Will Winchester was walking back to his house ...

Hey there! I'm finally reviewing this next part! Something rustled in the dead bushes, making Audrey yelp and run faster towards Will. Will embraced her and squeezed her tight. Here, ...

Hey there! I'm currently experience writer's block for my own story so took a break to come read yours :-) I know whose voice it is, but then I again ...

Hey there! I'm Che and I'm here to give a quick review of your story :-) So I will first go through and show you where I think you could ...

Hey there :-) So I haven't read the previous three chapters but after reading this I most definitely will! Even without reading the three other chapters, you've managed to portray ...

Hi there! Che here, for a quick review :-) This piece was really beautiful. The imagery you used was so strong and poignant, a mixture of somewhat erotic/lustful fire and ...

Hey there! I was actually so excited to read this! This isn’t the first time Mr. Mahmud is doing this. This line is kind of doesn't make sense. It would ...

Hey there, Che here for a quick review :-) I will start with pointing out any obvious grammar or spelling errors, or areas I could see needing general improvement. Obviously, ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review! I noticed that this was the oldest thing in the greenroom and even though I haven't read any previous parts I thought I'd ...

Hey there! Che here for a quick review. So I saw that someone else has left a really long review detailing any typos/errors etc. so I will just focus more ...

Hey there! Che here for a quick review :-) Since this isn't really a story I wasn't quite sure how to structure my review so I will offer advice from ...