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Firstly, I am not a big fantasy reader, so going into my review, please take some of what I say with a pinch of salt because I may just not ...

Hi Creeper! This was... short and sweet , we'll say. I think you could go a little more into her head and how she thinks about the school because it's ...

Hi Bug! I read the first chapters ages ago (not sure I reviewed it though, should definitely go and do that!) I like the sensory elements here, the coffee smell ...

okay so i finally got around to piecing my review together. I made a bunch of notes before and I don't know why I didn't just review it then! Anyway... ...

Hi! Here to review your piece today! I think this is an effective piece about intrusive thoughts and nighttime rumination. It's very compact, and I like how you use very ...

Hi Creeper! I've been enjoying this fanfiction, so lets get straight to it! Jason painted the face of the doll one last time and then, he stepped back. Very nice ...

Woo, back to Raisa! Haven't read a chapter of her's in a while! I HATE my dreams!! I don’t want to go to sleep anymore! Last night I dreamed that ...

Hi, I'm here to review this as part of the checklist challenge! Firstly, I am so glad you call it a full stop. Because I am sick of having to ...

Hi there! This is a beautiful poem that enlightens me about feelings and thoughts I have not personally experienced. I am not asian, so it is not something personal to ...

Strengths: I like how we start with Branwen on the shelf, and Jason shaving the wood in the toy shop. On the surface, it is mundane, but it has such ...

Okay, a much shorter review for these last few vignettes! It's a nice ending, but it doesn't pack the punch it could do. I don't really know why. I like ...

Hello! I wanted to review a long piece and yours was the longest in the greenroom I think, so I've spent a lot of time on it this morning! This ...

FINALLY BACK WOO I loved this chapter. The dialogue sections and character building seemed effortlessly intertwined with the fight scene, which was PERFECTLY written to the point that I kinda ...

Hi! I don't usually review romance so I thought i would give something outside of my usual genre a chance. The opening sets up a bit of mystery; Kat has ...

Hi Creeper! Hope you are doing well