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Wait omg, I did not expect this when I clicked on your poem. I was sucked into the rhythm instantly, literally rapping it out loud as I read. The wordplay ...

Hello! I've finally gotten to chapter two today! I'll say I think there's a real improvement already from the last chapter. There's a real sense of high-octane energy and tonal ...

Oof, this is a heavy-hitting poem. It's one I can definitely relate to. It's a very relatable topic, and you handle it well, highlighting the paradox of wanting connection while ...

This is a nice, short, busy story. It really sets up a nice theme of work-life balance! The tall, gray buildings of the city looming over my head from all ...

This is certainly an interesting short essay. One thing I noticed is that you put your punctuation after a space, not directly after the word. The correct formatting would be: ...

Hi! This was a neat and creepy little story. I enjoyed reading it, though it left me with more questions. Who is the pale man? What does he want? Why ...

Hi!! I'm gonna try to slowly make my way through your story and hopefully give you some helpful advice. This is quite different from what I would usually read, but ...

The repetition of 'i crash' 'i sink' 'i cry' at the beginning of the stanzas really does give the poem a cyclical nature, and I think to lean more into ...

The title really struck me when I saw it in the Green Room, and I knew I had to review your poem! on home becoming my parents' house This is ...

This is a very melancholy poem, seemingly about grief or perhaps unresolved guilt over the loss of someone, presumably a relationship, but it could also be about death? I like ...

This is a very strong devotional Islamic poem. Am I right in saying this is sort of a form of a munajat? Or a tawba? I don't know as much ...

Okay, hi! I'm finally back to review the second part of your story! Many years ago, in a village surrounded by verdant mountains, there lived a blacksmith named Marius. This ...

This is a nice little start to something! We don't get much, but we learn that Zara is not scared of spiders and thinks they need friends. I'm honestly on ...

Wow... this is another tragically beautiful piece from you that I had to process for a while after reading it earlier. I'm reading it through the lens of grief, and ...

Hi! I'm gonna review your story since it seems others might be a bit scared due to the length; no fear! I have a cup of coffee and a snack, ...