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Sorry it took so long for me to get back to you, but here I am. I really thought this poem was magnificent, mainly because it was so layered and ...

Hey Snoink, Here is your requested review, belated three months I'm afraid, sorry about that. I've returned to YWS after some time after somewhat of a hiatus from writing. Anyway, ...

Where it says, "And Repunzel spoke in the tounges of man", is that intentionally illegible? It would make sense given that sentence and the title, but I can't be sure. ...

I read your last one, and I loved it. I read this one, and I loved it. You would really be a great prose writer, I think. The "Rome is ...

Hey Sopster, I really liked the clevernesss of your voice in this poem, and the altogether lightheartedness in the way that you presented the death of a boy. It was ...

Wonderful poem. Brief and to the point. Yes, we all feel this way when doing math, except I'm taking Geometry this year, and it's basically Algebra with shapes. But next ...

Hey Inkwell, Wow. This was really good and, well...interesting. Is this an anti-Bush poem? I figured because of "mass murder" and things like that. I think this was really clever ...

Hey Waterlily, I'm going to be honest. I didn't really like this poem. Those who have reviewed before me have already told you that this is not deep enough and ...

Hey Blue, I like this poem a lot, and in its uniqueness I find it hard to criticize. However, I'm not quite sure what you're saying from a political viewpoint. ...

Hey Bolshevik, Wow. When I read this, I can't help but notice how much it reminds me of "She's Always a Woman" by Billy Joel. That's a great song, and ...

Hey Elizabeth, I really, really liked this. You write this beautifully, sincerely, and personally, and that's what made this fun to read (gripping too, I would say). You have a ...

Hey Milkncookies! I'm not sure how serious you were about this poem, or if you just wrote it to let off some steam. Honestly, I've never been a fan of ...

Hey Ritaki, I thought that the voice that you gave yourself in this poem was really appropriate, but I didn't like what you are trying to say here. It didn't ...

Hey Knight, Actually, I think that your first poem entitled "Parallel" was the first piece I reviewed on YWS. xD. Yes, I'm a nerd. Yes, I'm blown away by this. ...

Hey Whatley! This was interesting. Your talent for haikus is very evident in this poem, but I think that for this, all of the formatting is very unnessecary (yes, I ...