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Wow. This is really long. I'll tell you what: you separate this into two or three posts, give it a title (it doesn't even have to be a good one, ...

when you were born you never crawled , you never walked you never ran. you simply stood and allowed the river of time New line>> to flow around you. (I ...

Romance? All I ever read is romance! Let's see . . . A Company of Swans[i] by Eva Ibbotson (my favorite book of all time) [i]The Host by Stephenie Meyer ...

Coast of Southern Chile The earth rumbles and cracks beneath my feet [s]Then[/s] A thrusting force knocks me to the ground A tremendous quake I cannot defeat No escape ; ...

Green I... I have a problem with this. It is pointless, and it disrupts the beginning flow. It is hard to start reading with this in the way, so I ...

Hey, Dreamwalker! Prologue: A Dreamer A dream was all this should have been. A miraculous, bittersweet, extraordinary dream that gripped so tightly to my heart [s]so much so[/s] that I ...

Since Winter's Twelfth Night has done all the nit-picking (and it would be a pain to do all that again :wink:) I'll do the concept part. ~Organization~ You did all ...

city rooftops and too-bright skies grant courage to those who leap. soft cradle below of beautiful lies, silenced wings from the darkness rise, and gently land in a heap. *sighs ...

When furled leaves glide on blue sky wings, and land In whispering, watercolored heaps; when sharp The tongues of frosty air that lick the grass To ashen gray; when in ...

He held her tenderly in his arms. Warmth filled his body like a summer breeze, tingly and comforting. She whispered in his ear, "I'll never leave you." She whispered* again, ...

I loved this. It is one of those new, contemporary poems with hidden meanings and wonderful words. Your rhythm was perfect, and I liked how you put in her movements ...

Hey, Kayyo! Welcome to YWS! I'm excited to read this, but I was wondering: is it a one-shot, or will there be more? Okay, red bold is a correction, black ...

Hey, Monstrar! I don't have much time now, but I'll come back and review this later, I promise! From what I read I can tell there will be very few ...

Hey, Kat! Well, I'm back as I promised to review this. I am so excited! Okay: red bold is correction, black bold is comment, and strike through is what it ...

Well, I vote Charlotte, and I've read both Jane Eyre and Wuthering Heights . So, er, I think my vote should count for . . . three! Um, I guess. ...