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Re: I******** POEM
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Mon May 08, 2017 10:15 pm
It's review time!!!! Woah this is really cool. I've never read a poem like this before it is quite unique. After reading it I instantly smiled not that the content ... -
Re: Iridescent Thoughts
WOw I really enjoyed reading this poem. YOu used words I have never seen before, but I think that truly strengthens your poem.You are a very strong writer.I have read ...
Mon May 08, 2017 9:59 pm -
Re: Iridescent Thoughts
WOw I really enjoyed reading this poem. YOu used words I have never seen before, but I think that truly strengthens your poem. I have read some of your other ...
Mon May 08, 2017 9:58 pm - Re: Deep Down Fri Apr 01, 2016 3:11 am
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Re: The depths of her hell
Wow this is really good!!! REVIEW TIME: Something I would say you could maybe change is too make it flow more. The poem is great there are just some parts ...
Sun Mar 27, 2016 1:52 am - Re: Deep Down Sun Mar 27, 2016 1:39 am
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Re: My Last Thought of Us
TIME FOR A REVIEW!!!! I just wanted to start out by saying this is a wonderful poem! Though it is very short it feels loud. I know most girls can ...
Wed Dec 23, 2015 2:33 am -
Re: My Last Thought of Us
TIME FOR A REVIEW!!!! I just wanted to start out by saying this is a wonderful poem! Though it is very short it feels loud. I know most girls can ...
Wed Dec 23, 2015 2:33 am -
Re: Forever
It's time for a review!!!!!!!!!! Wow this is a really cool little poem. Your formatting is awesome and the content of your writing is also amazing! You did a really ...
Wed Dec 23, 2015 2:29 am -
Re: Forever
It's time for a review!!!!!!!!!! Wow this is a really cool little poem. Your formatting is awesome and the content of your writing is also amazing! You did a really ...
Wed Dec 23, 2015 2:29 am -
Re: school days
ITS TIME FOR A REVIEW!!!!!!!! This is a really good poem! I can't wait to see what else you write! I love the idea in this poem You should really ...
Sat Nov 07, 2015 3:15 am -
Re: If water were hate
ITS TIME FOR A REVIEW....... Wow I really like this poem. See that is one of the amazing things about poetry is that your ideas have a purpose to them ...
Fri Nov 06, 2015 4:07 am -
Re: Punctuation is where it is
OMG ITS TIME FOR A REVIEW.......... this is probably one of my favorite poems I have ever read. From the first line till the end ( I don't know if ...
Thu Nov 05, 2015 4:04 am -
Re: Anxiety
This sounds really good! I think something you may think about working on is the flow of your poem. The topic and everything is great it just needs more rhythm ...
Thu Nov 05, 2015 3:56 am -
Re: What is it like?
Yes it is about me! Thank you so much this information really helped me
Thu Nov 05, 2015 3:45 am