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Re: The Game of Life
Hi, Matt here to review your story, one sec while I read it... Damn. Wow. Nice. I liked it, it had atmosphere, the characters felt real and human, even the ...
Mar 6, 2013 -
Re: A Life Through Death
An incredible story, I absolutely loved this piece. I'm glad you didn't dwell too long on the setting and historical context, as it's always nice as a reader when the ...
Mar 3, 2013 -
Re: Children of war
Hi there! May I start by saying that I'm glad you chose this topic, as it's something that should be close to all of our hearts. Most news channels don't ...
Mar 3, 2013 -
Re: Dear world
Hi there :) Poetry isn't my forte, so perhaps this is the realm of somebody more qualified... but I can't resist sharing my thoughts here. I liked your language for ...
Mar 1, 2013 -
Re: Thing That We Called *Epic Boredom*
Hi there! Have a review on me. This 'Light Novel Style' is an interesting idea that I'd like to see developed and worked with a little, but it's important that ...
Mar 1, 2013 -
Re: An Unpaid Extra
I can't think of anything I didn't like, except maybe the pacing of the interview, which seemed to pass a little quickly. It could be used for a little more ...
Feb 28, 2013 -
Re: The Contract
So! I liked this piece, it had a mysterious air that really reeled me in. The tone helped this, as well as the way you structured your paragraphs. The way ...
Feb 28, 2013 -
Re: Assassin's Chronicles: Roses of May ch 1
Ok then, so I wanna start by pointing out a couple of small errors I noticed as I read, most of which can be cured with a simple spoken proof ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: :: Rain ::
I'd like to start by saying that I admire the fact that you are brave enough to write a sonnet, they terrify me :D. Anyway, I loved the way that ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Momentary Distraction
An interesting take on a car crash :D Nice repitition, I like the theme, the feeling when you're suddenly thrown into a situation so fast and terrifying that you lose ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Possible Beginning of Porter Chronicles
I think that grammar is an issue and I agree that it needs to be re-written. For example: .........I'm no longer Calvin Gray and I'm no longer a kid I'm ...
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: A Tribute to Michael Jackson
So true, he was a legend. That thing about all those bands, I totally agree, I don't listen to much music, mostly because most bands don't have any depth, they ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Unknown
Hey, I'm gonna give this one a proper reveiw if I can, so I'll start off by writing any errors I come across as I go. First up: Four moons ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Unknown
It was really good, once again. Again, we had the mytery, such as the switch from 1st to third person repeating, because it raises the question as to whether or ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: Unknown
If there's one thing you need to change, it's that comment at the end, that was electrifying! It's really gripped me from the beginning. It was a little hard to ...
May 26, 2009
