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Hiya Tim! All was quiet in the village, save for the wind in the trees. Overhead, the full moon shone, bathing the town and surrounding forest in an eerie yellow ...

So, this is for Rosey's contest . Hope you enjoy it! Which path to take? by Kat I watched the girl enter the cave, knowing already what she would find. ...

Ha ha! This is my way for writing song lyrics. So you do say these are lyrics. We were reviewing from the poetry point, since you submitted this on the ...

Lovely poem, but please use proper grammar. Spell thing correctly. I'll do a proper review when you do so ^^

Would a teacher really ask a student to leave the room simply for being sleepy? Mine would just yell t me and put me on the spot. Actually, mine would. ...

Don't worry, you can ask a Mod (people with green names). In which do you want this to go? Action fiction, romantic fiction, etc. *Kat*

Sun: I was a bit bothered by your writing but i was caught up in it that it didn't matter. Bothered? O.o That doesn't sound too good. How bothered? Thanks! ...

My, my! Unstable, you have gotten better :D I'm glad you could so well improve your poem. You still haven't corrected some grammar mistake, which I'll point out: pretending to ...

Thanks Sunshine! *happy dances* Suzie, I believe there's something in your review, and in some of the aboves, that have misunderstood something in a sentence. She wasn’t crying, but her ...

I finished it, Megan! Just so that you would read the rest of my review ;)

Thanks Aymeh! Oh such a dear, Selene. thanks very much! Than you Rosey, for doing the review ^_^ As always, your reviews are much helpful and detailed. Again, thanks! :D

Thanks everyone! :D Angel: Really? Am I letting myself be influenced? I'm reading Jane Austen at the moment ^_^ Adnie: Thanks, dear. I will take your suggestions in regard. Passion: ...

Thanks June and Audy! :D

Hum, thanks Galerius. Sorry it was so much of a terrible read. I have edited it, and hopefully, cut out the cliches. I usually avoid them, but their easier for ...

Music: many thanks, dear. It was a very helpful review. bubblegum: Thanks bubble! I'm glad you liked it. Support is great :D