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Hi Loveless! How are you today? ^.^ I'm Kat, and I shall review this now. Please have in memory that I have slacked on reviewing for a few weeks now ...

Hi Logan! Kat's here, as requested. Hope I'll help! I. Details, details! I quickly drove down the never-ending road. I saw that I was running on empty. Okay, I personally ...

Hi there, Tranquility! Like awesome user name ;) I'm Kat - *shakes hand* - nice to meet you! I'll be your reviewer for today. I. Grammar and Punctuation A man, ...

Hi Mo! Kat's here again! You're my first (and probably only) review that'll make on my birthday, so feel special ;) So, I won't be nit-picking much because I adored ...

Tim! *tackles* I'm in love with you, based on this one xD I love it, love it, love it! I can feel so much on this, and the grammar and ...

Hi there, Mo! I'm here to try and be a good mentor to you, dear ^.^ So, I'll be dividing this into sections, the first one being... I. Nit-picks! It’s ...

Hi there, Juni! How have you been? I'm here to review -- as is my duty to my beloved student! Let's see how helpful I can be :wink: I. Breaks ...

Hi JD! Kat's here for a review, as promised. 1. Details! Prologue As I mentioned in Chat, this is spelled 'Prologue'. I loved his eyes, they were the picture of ...

Hello Juni, my dear beloved student~ :mrgreen: I'm here, as promised. Let's see what I can grab... I. Punctuation AS Lily has mentioned, not only your dialogue vocabulary could use ...

You know, I can't resist to a computer cookie :D Here is Kat for a review! Thanks for stopping by my WRFF thread ;) I. Details, details! In the tiniest ...

My God, Juni! This was just what I needed to read right now! I loved your style, dear. Your wording made me want to cry, and I could really see ...

Hi Juni! Kat's here for a review -- as promised! I. Details, details! In a lonely room she cries Here I'll disagree with both Eli, above, and roon. This is ...

Oh my God, I did not see this end coming! xDD This is sooo sweet! I like it very much. I don't have much to point out, so this won't ...

Hi Juni (yes, I did read your About the Authors)! Kat's here to review ^.^ I. Details, details! NO. Don't fall Here, I'll have to agree with Rose (the above ...

Hi! Kat's here *points at self* for a review! I decided to point out three main things, and not do the very detailed one, because in this case the first ...