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Hey there Music! As you requested (many thanks fro that) I'm here! Dream Beauty flashing in the night , Wondrous images of starlight . Wishes pass before my eyes ; ...

Hey lizzifer! Kat's here for a review! First off, this is really nice. the concept and how the idea is displayed are in some way original. Now on to the ...

Oh my God, Meep! I can't' believe I haven't seen this! I will epically fail, on a constructive review... Argh, who cares? Well, you do, but that's not the point... ...

Oh my God, Angel! I'm falling in love with your work! First it was the Jane Effect, which I'm still waiting anxiously for the next chapter :wink: . This is ...

Hey there Rory! Do you mind if I call you that? :D I read your poem. Then I read darko.denmark's review. I agree with him on some points. So, I'll ...

hey there Angel! I'm Kat, and I'm not going to do a review! I'll just say, I've been reading this delightful novel, and to be honest, I want more! It ...

Hey there threm! Welcome to YWS! you'll have great joy here. I'm Kat, by the way! And I'm here to review this delightful piece! On to it :D Give her ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'll review this lovely piece to you. Memories flash through my head in a blur , w hile hurt fills my broken heart . Tears ...

Hey there, Baileyboo! Welcome aboard to YWS! How you doin'? Kat's here for a review! So, on to it! I liked this, it's good. The rhyme scheme is perfect, thought ...

I completely agree with Kaylyn. I just have something more to add: you should not add smileys to your works. They do make the reading more fun, but they are ...

Hi there dear! Welcome to YWS! I am going to have to disagree with the two above.. poetry does not have a "traditional" format. It has one format, and that's ...

Hey! I'm Kat :D I'm silly to review, because I have nothing else to add. Expect that the stanza given to you by KaribbeanDiva would mess up your flow. Anyway, ...

Meep that was incredibly funny! My favorite part was: Harry: Excuse me, why are we running? Bella: Because that freaky vamp dude is gonna snack on me! I’m too useless ...

Hey there threnody! How ya doin'? I'm gonna review this for you! :D Your first stanza starts very nicely. I absolutely loved it. But as mentioned above, you have a ...

One of the most beautiful poems I've seen on this forum. In my opinion, is perfect as it it. One of my favorites *clicks on the little gold star* I'm ...