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Re: Dancers
Omg, Angel, this touched me! I can't find the words to describe how much I love this. It's definitely one of the top ten best poems I've ever read on ...
Aug 15, 2009 -
Re: A vampire, a clutz, a REALLY bad singer, and two random girl
Hi irishfire! This was awesome, and totally worth a second act. Just a few things though, Edward...What? In some parts, you seem to forget to put punctuation in, so revise ...
Aug 10, 2009 -
Re: Fetus (1)
Hi Zaddie! I'm Kat (in case you don't recall) and I'm here for a review! Let's get this party rollin'! I. Nitpicks Crying softly she turns her head away from ...
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Hi Samsal! I'm Kat *shakes hand* and I'm here for a review! So, I'll do a two lines by two lines review, okay? On it! I do not have it ...
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: Goodbye?
Hi Julie! I'm Kat *shakes hand* Now, I'd like to disagree with the above reader. There is no need to capitalize every first letter of the line, but there is ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: Toodle Pippy!
xD Jon I remember you posting this by stanza in the Chat and becki choosing words for you to use. I quite like it, very entertaining, definitely. Is becki home ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Does anyone know
Hi Flower Child! I'm Kat *shakes hand* and I'm here for a review! Let's get into it! I'd like to point out a thing I know must seem minor but ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Borrowing Flight
Hiya Hawkie! Here your overall review of your prize. Rhyme: You don't need to have rhyme here. I actually think this kind of poem would flow better without any of ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Cinnamon Rolls on Tuesday (Part I)
Hi Shina! This is the first review of your prize; meaning you'll have one more detailed and one more overall review to claim ^^ Nit-picks: How delightful . I thought. ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Heya Steph
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Full Moon
Heya Tim! I'm sorry not to have mentioned that we had at least a couple of weeks to finish the task, so I'm sorry my review will be baed on ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: An Ice Cream Truck in Late Summer
Hiya Stripes! Kat's here =D So, let's see what we have here! Seems like we miss it every time-- the music too quiet, the outside noise too great. I really ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: Michael and Manson
Hi! I'm Kat and I'm here for your overall review of this entry on my contest. CONFUSING: This piece, I'm sorry to say, was very confusing. At first, I was ...
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: The Masked Musician
Hi Avery! I'm not really sure how to review this. I kindda liked everything. I'm sorry I must fail epically on an overall review, but oh well. I really liked ...
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: Here where he will meet me
Heya Angel! Here's your overall review: Flow Your flow is predominantly even, even thought there are some spots where it should be arranged. The thing is, when I read this ...
Jul 18, 2009
