Just Give Me Your Poem.

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hi, would love a review from you. i personally think you're going to love this work. pls check it out:

look into my eyes




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Hello.
Would you try reviewing my poems? Your opinion would be a great help.

profile/bloomcadbury/portfolio/461179




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Hi! :shock:

You sound like just the person I was looking for!

Would really help if you take a moment to review my free verse poetry! It 'Gloom', just published it. Oh maybe you can check out an old poetry of mine too which was published a year ago. So, I'll be waiting!

Oh by the way, in one of your lines you wrote 'don't forced yourself into changes', yeah a little spelling/grammartical mistake. Check that out. Why do I care? Come on, what are friends for! :)

Best regards,
Me. :D
"We Are Groot."
— Groot




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Okay!
Everything is almost done. By tonight almost all of the requests should be finished, I hope.
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)




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Bumping threads,
If anyone wants me to read your works and review it, I would love to. Just mention it here.
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)




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Kiss-of-Sunshine-141651
Could you plz review my poem?




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Hi! Thank you so much for doing this. I'd really love it if you reviewed this poem of mine: Country of a Cruel Soul

Thanks again!
she/her




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Hi Fukase!!

Could you pls review this slam poem on Gay Love ?? :)
Honey and Sunshine

Shall always be ready to help you in any form!!

Thank you so much!!




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Hi Fukase

Could you pls review my slam poem on gay love?

Honey and Sunshine

Pls help me it's for a competition.

Thank you so much




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hello!
here's my poem: maybe I am not unhappy

I'm eager for any kind of feedback. Thank you :)




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There are 3 poems and a short story on my profile you can review if you’d like. I don’t have a preference on which one. :D




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would love it if you review this one

thanks alot




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Hey there, fukase! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!



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