Why hello there! Retro here for a review.
So really like this poem, like the sort of up dregged up horror-ness of it but in a very internalised horror which is not an easy thing to do so well done.
I think you could have dragged our some of this imagery more - like your cold metal idea - like the imagery could do with extrapolation. To really bulk out your poetry.
But overall really good work!
~Retro
Points: 189
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