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Mr.Knightley · 2010-03-10T22:34:11Z

So, as you can see, I've spruced up my WRFF thread a bit. Several reasons behind that bit of logic: 1) I feel bad for all of the people who I forgot about in this thread. Honestly, it's not that hard to go and do a review, but hey, I suck. This is me starting fresh (well, as fresh as I can, short of starting yet another WRFF thread and clogging the forum). New mindset and new reviews. Which brings me to my second excuse for changing the title! 2) New reviews. From now on, I'll be doing my absolute best in the critiques I do through this thread. If that means that I can only do one a day because they take so long, then so be it. You'll just have to wait, you big baby. 3) This goes along with reason number two, but it looks so spiffy when I give it its own number: I want the Reviewer II Badge. I want to be THAT helpful. And thus, I shall learn how to be. :D With your help, it shouldn't be too hard. : ) And with that, let's get to the good stuff: Things I will review: Fiction (Short Stories): Fantasy Action/Adventure Science-Fiction General Fiction Historical Fiction Fiction (Novels): Fantasy Action/Adventure Science-Fiction General Fiction Misc.: Art/Photography Other Advanced Critiques (expect a delay) Lyrics (will be mildly harsh) Poetry: Dramatic Lyric Narrative Other Things I'll do if you're nice and don't mind my grumblings: Non-fiction Scripts Things I won't be caught dead reviewing by default of gender: Romantic novels/short stories Most fan-fiction*, particularly the Twilight kind *But if it's not a Twilight fanfic, then let me know, and I'll see if I can do something for you. Just don't take it personally if I don't want to. :P And there you have it! I think I pretty much covered every topic...how lame, right? Well, just keep in mind that I'm looking to be helpful in any way possible, and if that means I have to be brutally honest with you, then I probably will be. : ) Good luck.

blackbird12

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Mon Jul 19, 2010 11:12 pm

blackbird12 says... · Mon Jul 19, 2010 11:12 pm

Would you mind reviewing this? Thanks a whole lot in advance.

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If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
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Prosithion

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Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:07 am

Prosithion says... · Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:07 am

Hey, I was wondering if you could critique a scene from my novella 'In Defense of Our Nation'.

I would suggest scene 1, but I'll leave that up to you.

novel.php?id=461

It's speculative science fiction.

Thanks,
Pros

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"Computer... Captain's musk"

dizzymisslizzy10

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Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:35 am

dizzymisslizzy10 says... · Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:35 am

Hey! Do you think you could review these photographs?

Here they are:
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Thanks!

Bravery is not the absence of fear, but the will to conquer it knowingly.

Mr.Knightley

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Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:16 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:16 pm

*closed for personal reasons*

"You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because you're all the same."

Lady Gaga

DreamyAlice

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Thu Jun 22, 2023 9:15 am

DreamyAlice says... · Thu Jun 22, 2023 9:15 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE

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The strongest people are not those who show their true strength in front of us but those who win battles we know nothing about.
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