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Would you mind doing this? Well, I have many good reviews for it already but I can definitely use some more. Just 1411 left
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All done. Keep on requesting! :D
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Hey Knightley :)

Could you possibly review something for me?
It's the first chapter/prologue of a romantic novel. I'm not too sure about it, it's a bit... meh, and I'd appreciate your awesomeness :wink:

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Sorry about the url... I'm to lazy to make it pretty :xd:

Thanks!
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Aw, you think I'm awesome? Why thankee very much! ;)

*reviews*
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Yeah... you know the drill :lol:

Can You See Me (Chapter Six - Part One)

Could you review this pretty please....?

xoxo Skins
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Finished! Keep on requesting, please!
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Hey :)

It's me, your WRFF thread abuser. :twisted:

Can you review this for me?

It's the latest part of my story, Can You See Me?

Thanks a bunch Timmy!

xoxo Skins
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:thud: I don't think I reviewed that Skins! I'm so horrible! Do you still want me to review it? It's terribly late, but I think I should make it up to you.
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Don't worry about it! :lol:
You can still review it if you want, it's up to you.
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Hi there!
I've written a general kind of short story for my creative writing class and I'd be really happy if you could review it for me:) As for gifts, I'd offer my soul but I'm pretty sure God would frown upon that and I'm kinda looking forward to heaven...so I'm hoping a giant obnoxious smiley face and a million thanks will do. Here's the link!:

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Thanks a ton! Casey




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Done!
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Critique my story Blood and Fire? Please and thank you! ^^

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Reviewed. Have a cookie, Minion. *feeds*

Anyone else want a cookie and a review?
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YAY! I can reply again :smt003

Anyway, can you review chapter three in my novel. It has no comments and alot of grammer mistakes (I think) but I really can't pinpoint it.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=65072

Thanks Mr. K!

And I would like a oreo cookie :smt003

Lots of :smt049, Nepo!
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