The air wet with blood,
The sound of organs stirring.
Raw red curtains rapidly unfurling.
A sight veiled in water,
A coruscating disk.
Sterile walls slanting into stark square.
Through the caul, a warped reflection:
Emerging shrill from a fleshy hothouse,
Crushed beneath wheels of fluorescence.
Tender pink skin laced with blue veins,
And eyes of indefinite hue.
A splash is heard and the cord is cut.
The tension deafens all sound -
But the plunge of first breath is hollow.
It’s a sensation without victory but it lingers,
New yet familiar, like an old scar bleeding afresh.
Veins thicken, eyes bulge, and a howl shatters the silence.
(edited it because I totally agree about the old final line)
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