Reviews by an Aspiring Master (Closed)

Mr.Knightley · 2010-03-10T22:34:11Z

So, as you can see, I've spruced up my WRFF thread a bit. Several reasons behind that bit of logic: 1) I feel bad for all of the people who I forgot about in this thread. Honestly, it's not that hard to go and do a review, but hey, I suck. This is me starting fresh (well, as fresh as I can, short of starting yet another WRFF thread and clogging the forum). New mindset and new reviews. Which brings me to my second excuse for changing the title! 2) New reviews. From now on, I'll be doing my absolute best in the critiques I do through this thread. If that means that I can only do one a day because they take so long, then so be it. You'll just have to wait, you big baby. 3) This goes along with reason number two, but it looks so spiffy when I give it its own number: I want the Reviewer II Badge. I want to be THAT helpful. And thus, I shall learn how to be. :D With your help, it shouldn't be too hard. : ) And with that, let's get to the good stuff: Things I will review: Fiction (Short Stories): Fantasy Action/Adventure Science-Fiction General Fiction Historical Fiction Fiction (Novels): Fantasy Action/Adventure Science-Fiction General Fiction Misc.: Art/Photography Other Advanced Critiques (expect a delay) Lyrics (will be mildly harsh) Poetry: Dramatic Lyric Narrative Other Things I'll do if you're nice and don't mind my grumblings: Non-fiction Scripts Things I won't be caught dead reviewing by default of gender: Romantic novels/short stories Most fan-fiction*, particularly the Twilight kind *But if it's not a Twilight fanfic, then let me know, and I'll see if I can do something for you. Just don't take it personally if I don't want to. :P And there you have it! I think I pretty much covered every topic...how lame, right? Well, just keep in mind that I'm looking to be helpful in any way possible, and if that means I have to be brutally honest with you, then I probably will be. : ) Good luck.

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Mon Apr 05, 2010 8:51 pm

Sins says... · Mon Apr 05, 2010 8:51 pm

Heya

Could you review my fantasy fiction? You reviewed he first chapter of it, I think. :wink:

Your review was helpful, so I thought I'd come back for another one please!

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Thanks in advance,
xoxo Skins

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Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:54 am

Mr.Knightley says... · Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:54 am

Finito! Keep 'em coming, guys! I'm wide open here.

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Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:50 pm

Rydia says... · Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:50 pm

Hey, I'm not sure if you do art reviews? If not feel free to ignore but I'd appreciate it if you could give Sarah a review:

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Thank you. If you'd like a review in return, feel free to send me a pm.

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Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:24 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:24 pm

Reviewed! That's the first time I've ever had someone ask for another person's work to be critiqued.

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Thu Apr 08, 2010 11:51 pm

Sins says... · Thu Apr 08, 2010 11:51 pm

Hey Knightley

I've written some more of my Fantasy story, if you're interested. It's the second part of chapter two. It's pretty short though, by the way :wink:

Can You See Me? (Chapter Two ~ Part two)

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Fri Apr 09, 2010 4:51 am

Firearris says... · Fri Apr 09, 2010 4:51 am

Hey Knightly. Willing to do an essay, by any chance?

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[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"
Take that, Lumi.

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Fri Apr 09, 2010 1:36 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Fri Apr 09, 2010 1:36 pm

Completay!

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Sat Apr 17, 2010 12:31 am

Sins says... · Sat Apr 17, 2010 12:31 am

Hey Knightley

May I please have a review on my fourth chapter of Can You See Me?
To me, this chapter's a bit of an epic fail... so yeah! I need help!

Thanks,
xoxo Skins

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Sat Apr 17, 2010 2:45 am

RayquazaKid says... · Sat Apr 17, 2010 2:45 am

Hi, could you review this for me?

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Mon Apr 19, 2010 7:20 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Mon Apr 19, 2010 7:20 pm

Done...took me a while. Dx

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Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:57 pm

Sins says... · Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:57 pm

I'm aware that I'm beginning to sound stalkerish here, but that's what makes me cool

Anyway, fancy doing me another review on my novel/story?

Can You See Me? Chapter 5

Thanks in advance!

xoxo Skins

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Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:06 am

Maddy says... · Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:06 am

Hey Knightley,
I'm hoping you remember awhile ago I got you to review some chapters about a Goosebump novel? Well, now the second part is released.

Some critique, please?
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Thanks in advance.
-Mad

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Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:50 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:50 pm

Done! I need more! Hayulp!

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Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:05 am

WhiteTiger93 says... · Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:05 am

Hey Knightley!

I'd love for you to reveiw this and I'd be so grateful!

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Title: Golden Souls (part 1)
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Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:43 pm

Mr.Knightley says... · Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:43 pm

Okay, Tiger! *reviewed*

Bring it on, peeps! I can handle it.

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