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Hi Thren!!! Can you please review this one piece called "You don't mean it." I'll make you find it cause I'm too lazy to dig it up. Thank you sososososo much!
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I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

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Chapter 3 and 4

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i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx
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Done with both. Brilliant job guys!

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Hi Forever! Will you please review my NaPo's thread?
I don't have the link right now, but if you go to Literature Forum, you'll see the sub-forum of NaNo, is the National Poetry Month etc. So scroll down and I'm there. oh, what am I babbling about! I'm sure you know just how to get there.
Anyway, thanks!

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A story in Other Fiction?

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Would be thrilled if you took a look at it.
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Well, I'm not looking for a review as such, But could you please look at my blog? It's not a blog as such, but a story from which I post daily... you know, so i don't have to think about chapters, but can just write a diary for my character!
Well, I'm not looking for a review, just a small look at what I'm doing and what I could change! Could you please post your comments [they can be as short as you like] in the comments section of whatever post you look at? There are only 3 so far, so it shouldn't take you that long, and you don't even need to review! I don't mind if you take a few days/ a week though... That's sweet!
Oh, and I almost forgot! Here's the link to [my blog] 'Dear Diary'

Thank you so much!
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Asxz~ I'll keep track of that and tell you what I think.

Eimear~ I get started on that in just a sec. It'll be done in a few.
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hey! fancy a short story?

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Thank you so so much :) Its a first draft so be extra nit picky ;)

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Would you care to take a look at what's possibly going to be my first novel (a very early version, however)?

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Thanks in advance!
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