Threnody's Review & Editing Establishment

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Threnody
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Mon Jan 19, 2009 6:14 am
Threnody says... · Mon Jan 19, 2009 6:14 am
Yep. I'd love to do some critiquing. (I do take chocolate, lattes and sugar cubes please.)

Some things I specialize in therefore enhancing the quality of the review:
• Short stories of any genre.
• Poems of any kind.
• Scripts
• Art/Photography

Things I am a bit shaky about and therefore can't review very well:
• Anything rated "R." (But actually, just explain why it's rated like that and I'll figure out whether or not I'll review it.)
• Romance
• Fan-fic (depends if I understand the base plot.)

So yes. That's it. I don't charge anything but tips are always welcome.

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
Last edited by Threnody on Sat Apr 18, 2009 5:33 pm, edited 12 times in total.
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~ The Little Prince~




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anti-pop
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Wed Jan 21, 2009 12:04 am
anti-pop says... · Wed Jan 21, 2009 12:04 am
Hi, Threnody. Nice to meet you! I'm Pop.

topic42343.html
^^Short and sweet poem for ya. :D


*anti-pop
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...
-Libretto




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RGallagher
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Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:52 am
RGallagher says... · Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:52 am
Hello, Forever! Would you mind reviewing one of my short stories for me? =]

Title: The Elves are Coming
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: post492214.html
Word count: Around 615
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Need a critique? Post here!
topic42126.html




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Threnody
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Thu Jan 22, 2009 4:52 am
Threnody says... · Thu Jan 22, 2009 4:52 am
antipop~completed
RGallegher~completed

Thanks for posting guys!
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~ The Little Prince~




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*DaughteroftheMoon*
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Thu Jan 22, 2009 4:10 pm
*DaughteroftheMoon* says... · Thu Jan 22, 2009 4:10 pm
Hey, could you please review these for me. *shows a twenty* I'll pay you for good work. *wink, wink*

Both are other poetry.
Is life a breeze?
topic41735.html
Moonlit Beach
topic42432.html
Amor Vincit Omnia




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Threnody
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Fri Jan 23, 2009 12:36 am
Threnody says... · Fri Jan 23, 2009 12:36 am
DaughteroftheMoon~done
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anti-pop
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Sun Jan 25, 2009 6:06 am
anti-pop says... · Sun Jan 25, 2009 6:06 am
post494087.html#494087
^^Chapter one of a new project for me. :)


*anti-pop
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...
-Libretto




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WaterVyper
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:52 am
WaterVyper says... · Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:52 am
topic42614.html

Could you critique this, please? This is really, really experimental and I'm not sure if it'll work.
There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.




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Writing for love is a pas
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Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:19 pm
Writing for love is a pas says... · Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:19 pm
Hey, Could you please please please please review this for me?

Five Heart Shaped Necklaces Chapter 1
topic40812.html
and
Chapter 2
topic40828.html

Thank you so much!
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asxz
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Wed Jan 28, 2009 3:45 am
asxz says... · Wed Jan 28, 2009 3:45 am
Hello, Review please!

Prologue
Chapter 1 part 1
Chapter 1 part 2

Rip 'em to shreds and post A.S.A.P

Thank you so much, I desperately need to know if anyone likes it!!!
::XoX::KeepWriting::XoX::

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abstractpoet
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Sun Feb 01, 2009 4:22 am
abstractpoet says... · Sun Feb 01, 2009 4:22 am
Well, hello there!
I have two poems - please review?

You used to play ~ topic42956.html
Green ~ topic43024.html
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Threnody
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Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:11 am
Threnody says... · Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:11 am
It's all right guys... I won't bite. :D
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~ The Little Prince~




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imapoemperson
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Sat Mar 21, 2009 2:38 am
imapoemperson says... · Sat Mar 21, 2009 2:38 am
post530063.html#530063 please review!
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Hannah
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Sun Mar 22, 2009 4:35 pm
Hannah says... · Sun Mar 22, 2009 4:35 pm
^_^ Hi, Forever Threnody.
If you could take a look at my newest poem and be as harsh as you can, I would adore you forever!
Harshy harsh harsh! It's Lyric Poetry, I suppose, but that's not the same as lyrics. Anyways.

Take a gander?

It's called Seasons of Ice or His Eyes. If you could also maybe pick the title you think is better after reading it, that would be great. I can't decide!

CLICK!
you can message me with anything: questions, review requests, rants
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Threnody
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Mon Mar 23, 2009 2:54 pm
Threnody says... · Mon Mar 23, 2009 2:54 pm
Okay, I'm back again and ready for business. :D

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~

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