Young Writers Society

What an empowering story! Your pacing as an author kept me reading, I couldn't look away. The predicament of the characters truly adds to the sense of urgency within the ...

This is something I just wrote, but it definitely fits the bill. “It’s better to hold the light to the point it hurts than to fall into the darkness.” Actually, ...

What a moving narrative! First off, the title drew me in. Second, the author's use of vocabulary certainly elevated and added to the overall effect quite splendidly. The author's use ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary To mirror what Avian said not very long ago, I think I have a new favorite character… I saw on your wall somewhere that you ...

heyo! I noticed you review on quite a lot of things. I also noticed that this was a poem and decided to review it once I saw it was you ...

I got a very minor, but weird bug going on. [pretext: I'm using DuckDuckGo on a laptop with Windows 10. I've already restarted everything, even my wifi router (unintentionally lol), ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary The Valencia Desert was a wide-ranged land filled with hot sand and sun. The sky was a pink hue, with dunes layered as far as ...

A sequel to Circus Freak, Circus Rose, Circus Marionette, Circus Petals, and Circus Story.

After Rose wakes up, Sloth is interrogated.

Minorly concerned about the based on a true story part, but let's go. Where I smiled: The writing style is immaculate, it showcases an almost dreamy terrain, giving a sense ...

William and Taury meet someone interesting

Hello there, Raven! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the possessed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - This is a haiku on characters from your ...

frantically googling "helmsman"

I tried posting my character designs on here but it didn’t work.

In which Charax meets a sukalla

Alright, let's cut to the chase. "April is taken with a grain of salt every year." It's like you've reached into the depths of memory and pulled out the raw, ...