this isn't what i wanted

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Wow, i loved this...

fig newtons till i vomit... ew... why not grow a damn tree in your belly while you're at it? MARVELOUS!!!
Note to self: Work harder on constructive critisism dear, i can't like everything...




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While very creative in its own right, I just couldn't get into it Brad...maybe I'm reading it wrong.

I must tell you, I totally empathize though :)
Got YWS? I do.

Lumi: Don't you drag my donobby into this.
Lumi: He's the sweetest angel this side of hades.




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Seemed to not flow. But other than that, not bad. Have i ever called anyone's work bad?
Cause i'm a one man,
I'm a one man,
I'm a one man,
I'm a one man revolution.



A wizard is never late. Nor is he early; he arrives precisely when he means to.
— Gandalf