Young Writers Society

1000 WORDS The photograph is labeled neatly Pinned to a corkboard Reminder of a girl Thirteen years old Clawing her way out Of the middle school box Finding a hole ...

This is my first review. Forgive me if I make a few mistakes. I recently read the book, The Painted Duchess. Its a book about a Duchess, she is beautiful, ...

Great book. Original idea, believable and lovable (some of them) characters. The beginning is confusing, but bear with it and reap the wonderful rewards of a really great book. If ...

blood on a dandelion, the petals peel and shiver down into solitary winter - where even the beautiful freeze to be time-tapped and sapped of syrup and libido. Lips push ...

Okay this is my first story on TYWS...I'm nervous, I must admit, but I thought it'd be good for me. Please critique this and be honest. Thanks! (OH! And I'm ...

Written about a fourteen-year-old Canadian girl for fourteen-year-old Canadian girls. This is the journal of a soon to be fourteen year old girl, with big dreams, huge dilemmas, a hi-larious ...

leaves may fall the same time every year, petals droop and die, snow drifts and falls, day concedes to night concedes to day, your eyes meet mine like magnets. yet, ...

Please critique! Critique anything from grammar to syntax to plot line. I want to hear how you felt during the story, what you thought. Was it believable? Did it suck? ...

Okay here's my story. My plot really hasn't come out yet, because it's barely even one chapter long, and I'm not completely sure where I'm going with this, but since ...

said oh! aren't~aren't you God? Hello. Sir. 10/9 and didn't you love it, w. all the rampant Jesus slaying and goddamnit, we can re crucify Jesus ten times a week, ...

Asylum Dedicated to salvan Monday 13th December 2004: My Dignified Friend The first thing I saw was his gleaming grin, Though did not know it hid a life so grim. ...

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Before reading: Please, do not be too harsh in critiquing the stange words used and the odd plot. This is intended to be nonsensical to a point and it does ...

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