Young Writers Society

this is my brother's work, he's publishing it through my account. It means a lot to him, so reviews and critiques are welcome! Twilight The Twilight Comes Now The Sun ...

I wrote this at age of 11. I like icecreams, Icecreams like me. It's a natural habit, Like sugar with tea. Like a hurl without a sliothar, Would be stranded. ...

I will not be held responsible if you cause the next Great Flood. Thank you for your comments in advance It still needs lots of polishing ._. ---------- 9th August ...

The delicate blades of grass stroke her skin. With eyes closed she lies there, feeling the warm rays of sunlight gently caress her body. Oblivious to anything but there and ...

Chapter 1 Through out your life you see, hear, and learn many things. Destined from they day you are born to the day you must die, you get curios. Through ...

PG-13 for suggestive theeeeemes. Or something. Remember: advice, nitpicks not needed! ;) Days after that first one passed with haste, and I lost track of time rather easily. Hare was ...

A midwinter’s night, no one’s awake. In the grass, a silent creature lies. Its presence alone makes its target quake Along with the gaze of its yellow eyes. The hunter ...

This took me two days to finish. What I'd really like is critique on characterization and prose. This is pretty much my first time portraying Iris and Arion interacting, since ...

Okay! This is my first time submitting anything here and I'm a bit nervous... Ah well, here goes. This is a little something I just wrote for no particular reason. ...

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Heyy, this needs some reviewing and creative criticism! Please and thank-you Cool water lapsed against her feet uncomfortably, making Faia shiver. The moon hung in the sky like a great ...

[Already Gone—Kelly Clarkson: 022. Exodus] The sky is an overenthusiastic shade of Pepto Bismol, as if Mother Nature thinks she can smother my woes with a large dose of bubblegum ...

Chapter 3 is here with the appearance of the "wolf"! Now what will our Little White Riding Hood face? Lets find out! 3. Little White Riding Hood and the Wolf ...

“Today marks the one year anniversary of the debut of the Amazing Winged Man...” Violet McAdler blinked as she heard the Riverstone, Illinois local news station’s first story, its words ...

Life without you There is nothing left at all There is nothing to recall We used to be together And you left me alone… O come-on just tell me what ...