Published May 28, 2009
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Hahaha...great ending. I know I'd feel the very same way.
Once again, the dialogue fits perfectly, and everything seemed to transition perfectly. This time around, I didn't really see anything that can be critiqued, to be honest. The way the debate was carried out prose-wise was excellent and entertaining. I really enjoy reading about it in this way.
The sense of humor is refreshing, too. The only thing I think that could be revisited in my opinion is the whole forfeit. I don't think a dead cat would've stopped me from continuing on in a competition; but then again, some people get really attached to their pets, so what do I know. That's just my two cents, for what it's worth.