Published May 27, 2009
Life without you
There is nothing left at all
There is nothing to recall
We used to be together
And you left me alone…
O come-on just tell me what you want from me
O come-on just tell me what you need
It’s the time to tell for me to succeed
In my life
Without you
It was the time to celebrate
It was the time but it’s too late
It was the time when you left me
All alone…
O come-on just tell me what you want from me
O come-on just tell me what you need
It’s the time to tell for me to succeed
In my life
Without you
You came to me and said I rock
I was nothing but just in shock
It was the day which was special to me
What you did was just you ruined it
Can’t you see…?
O come-on just tell me what you want from me
O come-on just tell me what you need
It’s the time to tell for me to succeed
In my life
Without you
Now you just
Leave me alone…
I don’t want…
Anything from you
Ooooooooo
O come-on tell me what you want from me
O come-on just tell me what you need
It’s the time to tell for me to succeed
In my life
Without you
By: Anshita
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Hello again!
I really like the way that you don't limit your lines to rhymes. I think those kind of lyrics make up great songs.
According t me, this song is better than your previous one.
I don't have anything else much to say.
I'll review your other songs later.
All the best and keep writing.