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:)This story made me smile. Except I only read half way through it before I began skimming. Although it sounds like a really interesting read there wasn't really a hook in the beginning or anything that kept me hanging on every word. I'll keep coming back to read on it though if you add more. On the upside, your writing is AMAZING! Your sentences flow extremely well and your descriptions are easy to imagine. I'm going to have fun reading about the Soulless — pretty cool. I one day hope to write like you. ^ w ^ Keep it up!