Hi! America is kind of in bad shape right now, so I figured I should write a poem about it. I was inspired by Langston Hughes and how he exposed how horrible things were, but still kept a tone of hope. I'd like to ask people to focus especially on my choice of verbs and adjectives, as well as my ending, because I feel like it's kind of weak. But, criticism on other aspects is always appreciated. Also, please don't start any debates here, I just want advice on my poem, I don't feel like getting in a fight with anyone. Thanks!