Connection - 40

by Rook

~1140 words


Ugh...
What was that!?
A voice exploded from the ringing in Everen's head.

What? Everen asked thickly.

I thought you'd died!

What? Everen repeated.

I was so scared. Everyone's been dying and I thought it was you too and of course you didn't respond for days, and I thought I was gonna be alone forever. What even happened?

Everen felt like she was thinking through soup, and half of Kerra's words didn't mean anything at all. Kerra, listen... I can't...

She could feel Kerra's frustration burning through her mind, before it ebbed a bit. I'll talk to you when you're back to your senses but you need to tell me what happened.

Free from Kerra's voice, Everen was able to get a sense of where she was. She was lying down in a quiet room, though she could tell someone was nearby by small tapping sounds and the occasional sigh. When she pried her eyes open -- they felt like they'd been wallpapered over -- she saw that she was in Janna's office, on one of the beds. Janna was tapping away at her tablet, as usual.

"What's going on?" is what Everen tried to say, but all that came out was a rasping hiss, accompanied by a sharp pain in her throat.

Janna immediately looked up at her, standing when she met Everen's open eyes. "Good grief, don't try to talk, Everen!" She hurried over to stand at Everen's side. "The captain got you in the neck with that pen, and it was, shall we say, not pretty. Luckily you had the only nurse on the entire ship with you in the room, otherwise you could have been dead in minutes."

Everen was suddenly very aware of her neck. It hadn't hurt before she tried to speak, but it was wrapped in something. Everen couldn't see what it was. She looked around a little more and noticed that she had an IV in her arm, connected to a bag of liquid hanging from the IV pole.

"We rushed you back here and I operated immediately." Janna sighed and looked at something in the corner. "They really should have brought a real surgeon on board. I have some trauma and surgical experience, but it's not enough for something life-threatening like that. And the surgical robots creep me out. They did a good job on you, but I always wonder, what if they're bugged? It's hard for me to trust them when you could have died with a single misstep." She looked back at Everen, fear in her eyes. "I just didn't want to lose you. It would've been all my fault too."

Everen wanted to say, "Of course it wasn't your fault! Did you stab me in the neck? No! Of course not. This is all the captain's fault. None of this would have happened if she wasn't a murderer!" But she couldn't, so she just tried to communicate it with her eyes. It would be so much easier if Janna was telepathic too.

"Don't worry, you're gonna be okay. They have some really great drugs on this ship, not to mention cutting-edge technology. Although, I guess back home all of this stuff is super old news. But you probably don't care too much about that. Um, what else do you want to know about?" Janna peered into Everen's face.

Everen tried to indicate that she just liked listening to Janna talk but didn't feel that her subtle eyebrow movements were very helpful in portraying that message.

"Right, don't talk." Janna ran a hand through her hair. "You've been in and out of sleep after the surgery for the past couple days. I'm sure the drugs have been helping with that. What's happened since then hm..." Janna tapped her lips with the pads of her fingers. "Oh! The captain has been locked up!"

Everen cocked an eyebrow.

Likely encouraged by a facial expression that she could parse, Janna plowed ahead. “Yeah! I don’t know how much you remember, but the captain stabbed you in the neck with a metal pen, and Benji and I totally caught her red-handed. Literally.” She smirked at Everen who grimaced.

Janna stifled a laugh. “I guess all the blood would’ve been too gruesome to joke about for a normal person, but copious amounts of blood has kind of been my everyday life recently.” She paused for a second, as if collecting her thoughts. “So I immediately began administering first aid as Benji wrestled the captain into submission. He called for backup on his communicator and practically the whole ship stampeded into the hallway.” She grinned, but Everen thought she still looked worried.

Worried about what? The Captain? Or Me? Everen tried to make a little amusement shine in her eyes. She was really surprised at how little she hurt physically when she wasn’t trying to talk, though it still felt like she was trying to think through fog.

“The captain was not going to be turned in without a fight, though,” Janna went on. “She tried to frame the two of us as the killers, but Benji spoke over her frenzied accusations and explained everything. That man can really remain calm in a heated moment. It was almost scary.” Her eyes were unfocused.

Probably reliving the moment, Everen reasoned.

“Long story short,” Janna said suddenly, her eyes refocusing, “everyone believed us over the captain, and now she’s being held in an empty cabin, under constant watch. I daresay none of us really know quite what to do with her.” Janna turned almost absentmindedly and started straightening the already perfectly straight sheets on the bed next to Everen. “We’ve really just been waiting for you.”

Me? Everen wanted to ask.

Janna was quiet for a few breaths. “None of us know what to do, so we figured you could ask Abyssia what is to be done. Obviously Clarisse Bevington is no longer going to be our captain, but who can take her place? What do we do with someone so dangerous?”

Everen tried to reach out to Kerra but her brain and the connection were still too vague to properly access. She steeled herself and tried to tell Janna this, but pain gripped her throat and once again, all that escaped her throat was a hiss.

Janna spun around. “What did I say about not trying to talk?”

Everen raised her eyebrows, trying to ignore the pain.

“Don’t answer that,” Janna muttered.

Everen tried to nod without moving her neck but that proved almost impossible.

Sighing, Janna said, “Okay, am I leaving anything else out? She was captured, she’s being watched… Oh yeah, she still hasn’t given us a reason why yet. She’s clammed up pretty good. But I bet we’ll get something out of her eventually. That’s the mystery that everyone’s trying to solve now.”

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Que
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Que wrote a review · Fri Jul 17, 2020 5:36 pm

Hi fortis!!

Oh my goodness, I can't tell you how great it is to read Connection again after such a long break. :D

Janna immediately looked up at her, standing when she met Everen's open eyes. "Good grief, don't try to talk, Everen!" She hurried over to stand at Everen's side. "The captain got you in the neck with that pen, and it was, shall we say, not pretty. Luckily you had the only nurse on the entire ship with you in the room, otherwise you could have been dead in minutes."

I kind of expected, "Everen! I'm so glad you're awake!" before launching into the rest of this, but I guess this is just Janna? It felt a bit abrupt, though.

I thought you'd died!

What? Everen repeated.

I was so scared. Everyone's been dying and I thought it was you too and of course you didn't respond for days, and I thought I was gonna be alone forever. What even happened?

I had to look back at the last chapter to remember how things went down--I'm sure you wanted to work on this Everen plot bit, but given Kerra's reaction I think it could be good to have a Kerra chapter in between this one and the last one, where she thinks Everen is dead but isn't sure like she was with Shandi, just to up the suspense a bit before Everen comes back. I don't know, but it could be cool!

Everen wanted to say, "Of course it wasn't your fault! Did you stab me in the neck? No! Of course not. This is all the captain's fault. None of this would have happened if she wasn't a murderer!" But she couldn't, so she just tried to communicate it with her eyes. It would be so much easier if Janna was telepathic too.

I love this characterization oh my goodness

They have some really great drugs on this ship, not to mention cutting-edge technology. Although, I guess back home all of this stuff is super old news.

This makes it seem like she's a stranger on the ship...? When presumably she was trained with all the stuff and knows what's on the ship?? It seems a little awkward.

“The captain was not going to be turned in without a fight, though,” Janna went on. “She tried to frame the two of us as the killers, but Benji spoke over her frenzied accusations and explained everything. That man can really remain calm in a heated moment. It was almost scary.”

That seems... really easy. Considering no one knew about the conspiracy and probably everyone trusts their captain! Of course, this is just Janna telling this to Everen who is her patient right now, but it would be interesting to see how everyone else on the ship was taking this.

Janna was quiet for a few breaths. “None of us know what to do, so we figured you could ask Abyssia what is to be done. Obviously Clarisse Bevington is no longer going to be our captain, but who can take her place? What do we do with someone so dangerous?”

Additional question: what was with the messed up units? (I can't remember if we figured it out or not) It could be really concerning, like what if the government of Abyssia was actually in on the whole thing and the mission wasn't meant to succeed? I'm not sure, but I think that they should be thinking these questions as much as me, considering that their captain just murdered some people!! ;)

It was a little tricky to get into this chapter at the beginning, but I'm pretty sure that's just because of the year gap, not your writing! ;) I love how we can feel Kerra freaking out all the way from here, I hope she and Everen can get things sorted out. Also, Everen not being able to talk and trying to subtly ask questions with strange body language is hilarious. Janna does a pretty great job of understanding, though! I'm curious to see what questions Everen will get from the crew when she's able to talk again, and I'm somewhat certain that they would elect her as captain. ;)

I can't wait to read the next one! :)

-Q

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Hello, Stormblessed here!
Welcome back! Glad to see you start posting again.

After reading this, I think I'll have to go back and read the rest, it seems really interesting!
One thing that I wish you done, that since it's been about a year since your last post, that you did a quick summary at the beginning of this chapter. 39 other parts is a lot to reread for context. Though you did explain characters like Kerra well, making it clear that she was telepathic.

Everen wanted to say "Of course it wasn't your fault! Did you stab me in the neck? No! Of course not. This is all the captain's fault. None of this would have happened if she wasn't a murderer!"

This is kinda a lengthy rant, and that makes it a bit awkward, so maybe try editing that a bit?

Other than that, this was great! Maybe when I have the time I'll go back and read the rest.


Hope this helped!
Stormblessed242



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