Connection - 10

by Rook

Published September 10, 2018

E - Everyone

In Current Novel: Connection

~1062

Shaken by her mother’s visible agitation, Kerra took deep breaths on the elevator ride back down to the Lower Downs. By the time she reached her level, she’d decided that she needed to talk to somebody—anybody—else to clear her head of the sound of the smashing vase.

This is how Kerra found herself yet again in her favorite bookshop, Dark Lake Books. The place was absolutely covered floor to ceiling with books. There were tall towers of books as well. These reminded Kerra of the Abyssia itself, with all its tall pillars, but unlike Abyssia, these books had no horizontal supports, so the danger of them falling was much higher. They never seemed to fall though, at least they never had while Kerra was here, which was admittedly a lot.

Kerra loved books. They were quaint and old and had a charm to them that only old things had. They also never seemed to die out. It was as if, long ago, society had decided that to destroy a book was an offense of the gravest nature. Some fell apart naturally of course, but there were still books being printed and reprinted, for the eccentrics and collectors who liked physical copies for whatever reason.

Dark Lake Books had its own printer in the back. Like everything in the Lower Downs, Dark Lake Books was a fairly seedy place. The printer was somewhat questionably legal, and Kerra was positive that there must be some sort of code against having the sheer volume of books that Dark Lake had. But, like everything in the Lower Downs, no one ever snitched, so nothing ever happened to change it. Kerra smiled thinking about it.

Dark Lake had been there when Kerra had gone into stasis for a couple hundred years. And it was still here. Under new management, of course, but most of everything else was still the same, from the chipping paint to the four greasy copies of War and Peace that no one had ever touched.

“Back again, Kerra?” It was Drigg. His grandmother, Maru, owned the shop, but he did most of the actual cashiering and shopkeeping. He was nice enough, and Kerra counted him among her few friends, but she’d have appreciated it if he wasn’t so determined to be such a relentless flirt. Kerra really didn’t appreciate it, knowing that to ever be in a physical relationship would be to be in a state of constant pain. That, and Kerra really didn’t have any romantic interest in Drigg at all, or anyone else for that matter. That’s simply the way it was.

But he was still a friendly face, and he looked so genuinely happy whenever she dropped in that she couldn’t help but smile back. “Of course. How could I stay away for long?” She spread her arms to gesture at the wide room of books.

Drigg seemed to consider this. “You have been gone for quite some time. I’ve missed the little fairy that alights on these flowers of words!”

Kerra snorted. “More like a ghost that haunts the dusty tomes. When’s the last time you dusted, anyway?”

Drigg waved off the question. He was balancing on two legs of a three-legged stool, and he had his feet up on the cluttered glass countertop. He was absentmindedly twirling a cardstock bookmark in between the fingers of his left hand. “Where have you been, Kerra? We can usually count on your appearance, spectral or otherwise. Why, I bet we could even set our clocks to your arrivals. But here you are, almost… could it really be three weeks? Since your last visit!”

“I know Drigg, it’s a full shame. But I’m here now. Wouldn’t want this place to go unhaunted for too long.” Kerra drifted over to the table that held what she knew were new arrivals and started picking through the books.

“But what have you been up to?” He pressed.

Kerra sighed. Sometimes she thought Drigg was a little too invested in her personal life, but then again, they were friends, and Kerra hadn’t seen him for a while now. Wasn’t it only right that he should have an explanation as to why? “Would you believe me if I told you I was too busy breaking the law, and aiding and abetting criminals to stop by?”

Drigg laughed, and the sound of it was bright and clear and had no malice in it. “Oh really? And what exactly have you been doing, Kerra?”

Kerra couldn’t help but give him a sly look. “Oh you know. Breaking and entering. Harboring stolen goods.”

Drigg leaned took his feet off the countertop and leaned forward, resting his hands on it instead, and resting his chin in his hands. “Do tell.”

“What are you, a cop?” Kerra sniffed. She’d found an old volume of Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire and was riffling through it. She’d always loved the classics.

“Oh, you know me,” Drigg said. “Cop material extraordinaire. I definitely don’t have a printer in the back rigged to print the newest books into physical form. I definitely don’t run an underground droid racing ring. I’ve never once set my foot out of place. I am a perfect citizen.” He puffed out his chest.

Kerra just laughed continued to poke through the books.

Drigg deflated a little. “Come on,” he whined, “you can tell me! I cross my heart and hope to die before I tell any cops about it.”

“Yes Kerra, do tell,” a wavery voice came from behind a shelf of books that was packed so tightly that it was as solid as a brick wall. Maru wheeled out from behind it, in her high powered wheelchair. Kerra had seen similar models go about fifteen miles an hour on the pathways between pillars. Why Maru had one, Kerra didn’t know, but she smiled to think of the old woman flooring it along a crowded walkway.

“I don’t know if I should now,” Kerra said, smiling at her. Maru had snow white hair, and deeply scored wrinkles. It was odd to think that Kerra was actually born far before Maru’s time. It made her shiver. “I know what a gossip monger you are, and I really wouldn’t want this getting back to the law officials.”

Maru chuckled throatily. “Wouldn’t want to lose your cushy government job, now would you?”

A/N: This is clearly not where I would actually end the chapter, but I was very, very strapped for time. Also, Word's word counter froze at 882, so I thought I was a lot further behind than I was, but then it was 11:59, I c/ped it into an online word counter, and realized I had plenty of words. Dang Word >:[

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Shady
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Shady wrote a review Review · Dec 31, 2018

Hey hey,

Shady back with another review for you on this fine story. I'm excited to see what you have in store for me in this chapter! Let's get started...

Shaken by her mother’s visible agitation, Kerra took deep breaths on the elevator ride back down to the Lower Downs.


I mean, did you really not expect your mother to care, Kerra? It upset you and your sister when you learned of Shandi's behavior, did you really expect that it wouldn't upset your mother as well? Come now.

They were quaint and old and had a charm to them that only old things had.


Yessss <3

Drigg leaned took his feet off the countertop and leaned forward, resting his hands on it instead, and resting his chin in his hands. “Do tell.”


He's kind of adorable and I kind of love it. A flirt, yes, of the highest degree. But he also seems like a genuinely nice guy and I'm so glad that he makes an effort to be involved in Kerra's life. It appears that she doesn't get a lot of social interaction and I'm glad that he seems to care, even if it's just in a somewhat shallow way.

It was odd to think that Kerra was actually born far before Maru’s time. It made her shiver.


Huh, that is a really odd thought, isn't it? This whole stasis business idea sounds really neat, but also is really odd, especially in its consequences. Like how all her former friends are now dead and how she can actually be older than the oldest of people alive now, but still be young and in good health. It's an interesting thought to ponder.

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Aww, I like this chapter. It's really adorable seeing the interaction between Kerra and Maru and Drigg. It's just a nice, wholesome chapter of interactions between (presumably) friends and I like it.

I also really love that Kerra is the type of person to retreat to a book store when she need comfort. It's just a nice little detail that you wrote in there. Like, I totally relate. There's just something calming about being surrounded by books and having the nice aroma that book stores generally have all around you, but I don't frequently read books where the characters are also comforted by books, and so this just made my nerd heart happy to see that.

I see your author's note that this chapter division is also going to be edited later on when you don't have the time straps of LMS working against you, so I'll not make a comment on that, other than I think that that's a good idea. ;)

Onward to the next chapter!

Keep writing!

~Shady 8)

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BluesClues wrote a review Review · Sep 30, 2018

That, and Kerra really didn’t have any romantic interest in Drigg at all, or anyone else for that matter.


ayyyyyy 10/10 for the aromantic rep, if that's what this is and it doesn't later turn out that she was actually just too distracted for love or something and now is interested in someone.

Maru had snow white hair, and deeply scored wrinkles. It was odd to think that Kerra was actually born far before Maru’s time.


I love this detail!!! Coming into this chapter, I obviously had no idea what the story was about or anything, but it became clear early on in this chapter that we're very far forward in the future. This detail is one that I think people usually neglect when they've got a character who somehow gets transported into the future. It's one that really sort of cements the fact that Kerra is out of her element.

I don't have a ton to say about this chapter, since I haven't read the rest of the story and have basically no clue what it's about, but I at least wanted to say, great job worldbuilding. I really like what a sense I get of this future world based purely on this bookstore - there's a printer in the basement because ebooks are now so the norm that print books are seriously limited, Harry Potter is a classic, etc. It's fascinating, honeslty, and just a really great bit of world-building.

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mellifera wrote a review Review · Sep 30, 2018

Hey fortis! Happy RevMo and Review Day! Hope you don't mind if I hang around for a bit to give you a review!

I haven't read any of the earlier chapters for this work, so I do apologise if this interferes with my review. Nevertheless, I will try my best to help out!


This is how Kerra found herself yet again in her favorite bookshop, Dark Lake Books.


I think I would have like to seen the walk to the bookshop? How long did it take to get there? What is the scenery like along the way? Is there anything interesting between there and the elevator? I had no clear idea of what is between Point A and Point B. Unless you've already described this before, but I still would have liked some sort of judgment of time and scenery change.

It was as if, long ago, society had decided that to destroy a book was an offense of the gravest nature.


I understand the rest of this paragraph and what it's trying to convey, but I pulled this sentence in particular out because- okay, books are timeless. But surely there are people who destroy books? Just because they're always there, and there's old and new ones and they're constantly being written and made, doesn't mean that people still won't destroy them, regardless of the situation/context for doing so. And surely not all of society loves books the way Kerra does.


It seems odd to me that if the Lower Downs are generally shady and/or illegal, that it wouldn't ever get reported? If there's a bunch of crime happening, wouldn't there be bad blood between some people/organisations? Wouldn't there be a few people with either noble or selfish intent that snitched to someone? It seems almost as though the society is single-minded right now, but that might be just because I haven't read any other chapters.


when Kerra had gone into stasis for a couple hundred years.


o: you have piqued my interest. I definitely want to know about her stasis years/why she was in stasis for so long (or at all). But I suppose that would have been brought up beforehand and I just wouldn't know about it haha.

Kerra counted him among her few friends, but she'd appreciated it if he wasn't so determined to be such a relentless flirt. Kerra really didn't appreciate it,


I'm just bringing this up to because of the repetition of "appreciate/d". More as a little heads up to watch out for it as much as anything else!


He was balancing on two legs of a three-legged stool, and he had his feet up on the cluttered glass countertop.


I'm not quite sure I understand what this means? It sounds like he's balancing on the stool but then he's...standing on the glass countertop?


Wait does Kerra have a spectral form? Or is she a ghost? Either way?? I love it.


I love Drigg's sarcasm, he's charming and seems sweet enough despite his flirtatious nature haha. Although I'm not really getting those vibes from him? I mean, Kerra seems to empathises this a lot, but he doesn't seem to be so flirty to me. But take that with a grain of salt as I couldn't flirt to save my life :P


Overall I did enjoy this read! I have a lot of questions I'm sure would have been answered in previous chapters (is this sci-fi? It has a sci-fi feel to me). The way the characters are introduced is a delight, they already seem full of life and I love that they're brought in so seamlessly?

And again, I don't know if you've described the bookstore before, and I can get a pretty good reading on how I imagine it to be! I think I would've liked a little more clarification, but otherwise, I think you did a pretty good job overall.


I think that's all I've got for your today! If you have any questions, please let me know!

I hope you're having a wonderful time! :D

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