Okay, so i know this poem needs a lot of work, I just wrote this without really thinking or anything, and I feel the ending needs some work..so I would love comments from you!
I think of you,
of the moment we caressed.
You're scent intoxicating,
motions running slow.
I can feel the vibrations in me,
feel my satisfaction growing,
feel you pulsating.
You slither around my body,
taunting, teasing.
What a temptress.
You close your arms around me,
I'm short of breath.
You taste the sweat drip off me,
fire burns in my core.
And like the seductress you are
you leave as fast as you came.
Panting as you leave,
No, please stay!
You are the apple of my eye!
That match that ignites me!
The soul that completes mine!
Cliches roll off my tongue
with no effect to you,
as you turn back only to say,
"Look at what you've become.
Look around, to the wrongs you've done.
Look around, to what you've abandoned.
Look inside, to what's left standing...
I don't need your 'love'."
And you left,
creating an overbearing seafoam tsunami.
Crawling on the floor, I picked up the pieces
of what was left of you.
I rubbed the papers in my hand,
nothing that my heart could use.
Mortified of who would love me
and scared of what I would do alone.
That word traveled through my heart,
and pumped, pumped my fear.
Pumping fast, quick,
heart rate speeding up,
panting fast.
I can't breathe.
I can't see.
I can't smell.
I can't.
Seconds drag by
as I lie on the floor.
Minutes pass by
as I begin to cry.
Hours pass by
as I clean the house.
Days pass by
as I do absolutely nothing.
Weeks pass by
as you reject my apologies.
Months pass by
as I discover who loves me.
And the years pass by
where I am enlightened,
loved, and accepted,
always, by Him.
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