I know, I will never be her. Maybe she gives you something that I don't have.
It breaks my heart that you never realized that I was there for you, that I never left your side, and that you never returned the favor.
I just want you to know-that you will never find someone who loves and cares for you as much as I do, have, and always will.
Just when I thought that things could be different- you go and change my mind. If only I had known how much it cost to make you happy, and I can't help but wonder how much I would have payed, not knowing that all our love was lost.
We were just messing around, but I fell in love. It's hard for me to imagine my future without you. I just hope that I won't have to.
Life isn't worth living if I'd be living without you.
You've brought out so many different sides in me. You've made me so much happier. But seeing you with her tears me apart.
One day, you will see the stuck up girl inside her.
One day, you will realize who was actually there for you.
One day, you will realize that you can do better than her.
One day, you will come running back.
Until that day, I want you to realize this:
I've chased you long enough.
Now it's your turn.
Watch me run.
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This was great! I think most of us have been caught in unrequited love at some point, and this captures the feeling quite well. You write very poetically, it's almost like reading song lyrics. Keep that up! Didn't catch any spelling or grammar errors. Over all, this was a really solid piece.
-Sofie
Wow, I find this really amazing. All the words and phrases really gets me and make me create my own movie in my head. About what is going on, or what could have been, the things the girl did to just be recognized by the boy. It really gets me and makes me feel a bit emotional as if it was happening to me. So, keep on this kind of stuff, I really would love to read more of your work!
Thank you for the review! I really enjoy writing stuff like this. You can check out my other works, which, in some aspects, are similar!
Well, this is a interesting love letter.
But, if this is the authors story, then I am afraid to say, whoever will not come running back.
For one, whoever he is has determined that life without you is fine and presumably left you behind.
For two, whoever the girl is, if she is attractive enough (not on the inside of course) will always claim ownership of your love, because, that's how most weak guy's are.
And for three, it appears that the author has chosen the wrong boy to fall in love with, if he is weak enough to abandon the presumed author because some other girl has more jiggle physics, the author should not be thinking about him.
If ths is a made up story, then you have convinced me that you might be clingy, and I have a very simple solution if you can't stop thinking about him, accept that he will always be with Mrs.jiggy because most males are weak like that, and no matter how stuck up she is, her she'll will always make him stay with her.
This is not the author's story, however this person has been through plenty and was just looking for someone who cared for her even an ounce-because of this she became a little clingy.
Well, this is a interesting love letter.
But, if this is the authors story, then I am afraid to say, whoever will not come running back.
For one, whoever he is has determined that life without you is fine and presumably left you behind.
For two, whoever the girl is, if she is attractive enough (not on the inside of course) will always claim ownership of your love, because, that's how most weak guy's are.
And for three, it appears that the author has chosen the wrong boy to fall in love with, if he is weak enough to abandon the presumed author because some other girl has more jiggle physics, the author should not be thinking about him.
If ths is a made up story, then you have convinced me that you might be clingy, and I have a very simple solution if you can't stop thinking about him, accept that he will always be with Mrs.jiggy because most males are weak like that, and no matter how stuck up she is, her she'll will always make him stay with her.
Well, it appears that a have accidentally submitted the same review twice, I apologize for this error.
And no problem with the duplicate!
I thought that this was a very nice piece about love and loss. I really could feel the emotion and heart ache buried deep within the story. It was like a movie was playing in my mind, well done. I would like to see more stuff like this from you. Never stop writing, you have a very clear passion for emotional stories like this.
I have other works similar to this, if you'd like to read those and comment/review them! I enjoy writing such pieces. Thanks for the review!
Sure, I'd love to read more of your work. This type of literature really interests me.