Once again, Hi!
This one i promise I won't have as much critism as my past ones. Well again first off, the commas. It's killing me lol. But overall I really like this. It has a lot of imagery and is well structured. It has a good beginning, middle and end. I don't know why you'd write this poem, but I like it. And I get it because I also write random things. Well yeah not much compared to my last reviews lol. Keep up the good writing Yams!
Points: 2009
Reviews: 34
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