You know, I enjoy your works partly because it takes me like two minutes to decipher what it means.
Nice work. .___.
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how doo I cope wid it nowin dat no 1 nowz bout me n ma cru? n wot iz goin on bout lunch time wen i 8 da pie? i do luv dat pie so much. i aslo luv mousethus theorie on popul8on. im guilte ov bein dum. lol. cant spel gonna go 2 hell lulz. bout time innit blad? fam. mandem. cheese.
You know, I enjoy your works partly because it takes me like two minutes to decipher what it means.
Nice work. .___.
I'm not really sure wether this is a joke or not to be honest. But i'm going to guess no since you did post it after all. It looks like a 3 year old was given a keyboard and just smashed their tiny petite hands onto it. I don't quite understand what it is that you are trying to say. Something about being dumb? and pe? It doesn't quite make sense to me. I understand the whole using abbreviations thing, but there's a point where it is over used and just gets plain annoying. It doesn't have much of a storyline either, maybe its hidden and i'm not looking enough? Idk.
Sorry if this was harsh but i was just being honest >.< im sorry! x
Hello! Magenta here to write quick something.
Welcome to YWS, by the way. I see that you've done some reviews and submissions, but I haven't quite seen you around here. I saw this in the green room and decided to see what you did.
I wasn't sure if you wanted a real review here because I think that there is a lot to change here. I am really not sure why you have this here though, I mean, I don't understand how this flows or has a proper story line or plot to it. There isn't much to tell you, except that I suggest you refrain from using this "language". I don't understand some of the words here or how it had anything to do with the rest. I would like to see some more of your work (that I understand).
Even when you change it, there are still many mistakes such as missing apostrophes, fragments, and no real story.
"How do I cope with it, knowing that no one knows about me and my crew? And what is going on about lunch time when I ate the pie? I do love that pie so much. I also love ? mousethus ? theory on population. I'm guilty of being dumb. Laugh out loud. Can't spell going to go to hell lulz. About time isn't it? blad? Fam. Mandem. Cheese."
Quite confusing... Sorry if this was a bit harsh but I was just really confused.
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