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I totally agree with this. This poem is great! I really enjoyed reading it and the format which it's written is perfect. Keep writting!
it definitely captures the spirit of a loving parent looking on at their child, or even perhaps, somebody retrospectively looking at their past self. mesmerizing!
It is a wonderful poem. It's interesting the way you repeat the word "simple." When I think of that word, I think stupid, but you mean innocence. It actually took me a minute to realize that. Interesting, though, I can't find any fault in it. Good job!
I loved this! Good job:) I really understand what the speaker is saying. A baby's simplicity and innocence is truly beautiful.