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dies
cries
flies
i was not informed we were writing poetry
Neither was I.
-a poem by yws
P.S. by TheBlueCat: When someone asks me what poetry is I shall refer them to this.
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hi @SpunkyMonkey jay here to drop a review on your work
lets get started
First off the poem to short i bearly could not give you a review like that cause your poem was to short but i know what i know from your poem you talking to the ones that can't wait poems but you are writing a poem about it and thats fine 😀
Second my compliment to your poem is it was nice of you that you are being nice and making poems for people that need help with poetry and i im glad that you came and took your time and making poetry
Third how you can improve is you should of add more to this poem and just keep up the good work cause i im proud of you that you improve yourself but you forgot to add more to this poem
keep writing by jay~!!
Thank you Jay!
The pace of this poem reminds us of a limerick, the greatest form of poetry. We also appreciate the honesty of those who wrote the last time. This is a greatly entertaining poem!
XD Thank you!
Truly amazing!
Truly amazing!
Art.
Beauty
YAY
YAY!
YAY!!!!
*joins in yays*
Hello @SpunkyKitty! I'll be popping in here for a quick review, hope you're having a lovely afternoon! Okay, let's hop right in.
:') and the last two lines, what a plot twist! *claps* Overall, fantastic poem, you should be proud of this work of art!GrowsGlows
It's beautiful, truly-- a masterpiece! The flow is absolutely seamless in the first stanza!
Keep it up and keep writing!
~Your friendly Neighborhood Majesty of Nastiness~
XDDD
HAHAHA THANKS FOR THE REVIEW
I say that writing is what happens when you bleed on paper, and poetry is what happens when the soul finds the perfect musical notes to express it's melody. Both are true, and so is this. although rarely have I seen those sentiments expressed in such an amusing fashion as this. It's a bit hard to review such an obvious joke, but I wish I could get more than a two second laugh out of this? But maybe I'll be able to quote this later. Good job!
Thank you!
This poem was very short so it's hard to write a review but I'll try. I like your usage of rhyme throughout the poem. I wouldn't put a poem by yws since only four authors were involved. I'm not exactly sure what this poem was getting at and I think if you made it longer and added more clarity it would improve the poem. Since yws is a name and an acronym you should use caps (YWS) instead of yws. Overall very interesting read but I feel it would have done justice to make it longer. You all are very talented authors so I know you have the ability to do that!
So, um, yeah I agree with this. But we weren't actually doing a poem, this was literally taken off @Lilliana's wall. I did it as a joke XD
Ik lol
hehe >:D
@TheBlueCat @lillianna @Stellarjay
pssst
that's the wrong lilliana
hers has a double n
@lillianna <.<
oops