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Convalescence

by Sam


Still as good as when I read it on AIM, but it pales in comparison to Stung. :P

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Mon Sep 05, 2005 2:39 am
Chevy wrote a review...



Gosh...everything somehow relates to music...heh. I do that alot.

"Conducted through bones," --Incredible phrase. *Jots down in notebook" lol, jk.

"I could close my eyes as well, join you
in the porous dark, listen to the shape
of your fugue and my echo." --Oh so melancholy. :S

And what the heck is "fugue?"




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Sun Sep 04, 2005 5:45 am
Crysi wrote a review...



I love this... The imagery is amazing, and on a side note it's very synesthetically pleasing to me. Anyway, I love the way you write about music. It just really connects with me. You have a very unique way of presenting it, and I always enjoy reading your mixtures of musical terms and descriptions of the surroundings. Beautiful.





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