This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review on this lovely Review Day! That's right, Lima Bean. I'm back again.
I wanted to note that I love how connected the chapters actually feel and at the same time--they're broken up with ease. None of the endings have felt awkward this far and none of the beginnings to each chapter have either. I love how flowing each one is into the next part because this does feel as if it's one large chapter that can possibly be read all at once without any feelings of awkwardness.
I was nearly done reinforcing the seam of a teething toy when I sensed Chandi’s husband approach, more intent on me at the moment than his family. Still, when he arrived in sight he put a hand on Chandi’s shoulder before kissing her lips. She smiled and brought him back for another, prompting Matul to stick his tongue out and scrunch his eyes closed in disgust.
The part with Matui sticking out his tongue and scrunching his eyes felt a little too animated? Then again, this is his son so I can't be too surprised. Just a thought.
Bahij smiled at his son, ruffling his hair before looking at me. Only one thing spread between us: the light yet oh so slick feeling of kalisi coated in blood.
This is another paragraph that I found to be a little weird. I guess I'm not a fan of the phrase 'oh so slick' because it's worded a little oddly.
I didn't actually expect this chapter to be developing the plot as much, but it is! I'm pleasantly surprised that this is more than just them doing leather and there being more character development for Bahij and his direct family. I enjoy how the plot is worked in with ease and I'm also quite captivated by the plot which isn't something I can say too often when reviewing. I'm usually drawn in by the characters--this is also the case here but the plot's taken a turn that I didn't expect, keeping the novel fresh.
Also--conflict! I love that there's conflict between Bahji and Kerani. The 'family executioner' part got me remembering a character that I love from a show that I'm currently watching because of how he treats her and how he sort of says that while metaphorically gritting his teeth. This gets pretty dang intense, Rosey. The tensions are high and I absolutely love that. Also--ohmygoodness she goes on such a tangent. I found that to be a little long and I'm iffy on it? It's still effective.
This is the strongest part this far and probably my favorite though I kinda wished it ended sooner instead of her ending up near her father again. This doesn't make any sense to me why this just doesn't happen in the next chapter part--it's the first ending that I didn't find to be strong. I would've ended closer to the end of the conversation. Sets up for the next part, but I'm not a fan of how intense and in-depth their conversation is compared to how brief the ending is.
Gooodnesss, this novel is lovely. If you have any questions, don't be afraid to ask! I hope I helped and have a great day.
Points: 220
Reviews: 1081
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